Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Robina
There should never be a woman who is getting up in age --Should of never feel like a bottle of cheap wine.

Well said Robina, about us necessary old gals.

Gert

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent point about a woman's inner value being measured by how she ages. Great comparison to a cheap bottle of wine. Some women cheapen themselves by all they do to try to look younger. "Or gets she bitter" doesn't make sense, Maybe something like "If she gets sour-faced or bitter." Try to clarify that line. judi

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend. Hubby told me this, he does not know his language anymore.

reply by judiverse on 30-Jul-2015

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Ine;
-your perspective on going all is fascinating and most exceptionally brilliant in your incredible imagination is very inventive and ingeniously creative.
-The writing is imagery is fourth with and is very demonstratively descriptive and exponentially expressive throughout the writing.
-Good use of enjambment
-excellent use of metaphor within this poem
-thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.

reply by krys123 on 30-Jul-2015

You are so welcome

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is one of the best writings I have seen from you Ine. It is very profound. I would have given a six but I am out.
Teresa

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend. A virtual one is fine too.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Very good Ine - I'll remember your words. Good use of metaphor in 'she has never been more than a cheap bottle of wine'. LOL. Your first word 'Then' drop the 'n' - should be The. Warm regards Dorothy x

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week. Thanks for seeing the typo.