"OUT OF THE BLUE"
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "~The Awakening~ part 1"A book of short stories.
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Comment from Neonewman
I love when piece captivates and draws one in such as this one does. My attention never swayed and my mind was left stimulated. God bless!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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I love when piece captivates and draws one in such as this one does. My attention never swayed and my mind was left stimulated. God bless!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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I'm so pleased you enjoyed my story. Part two is now on the first page and available to read. :) Mel.
Comment from c_lucas
Archeological digs go very slowly. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. No errors.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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Archeological digs go very slowly. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. No errors.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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You are indeed right. They found Richard in their first hole. Part two is now on the front page and available to read. Thank you Charlie. :) mel.
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Read it Mel. Charlie
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Thanks again...
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this s an excellent write, write hand blue, you created an interesting story about the king that wanted to be heard in this century. I look forward to what he's going to tell the doctors.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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this s an excellent write, write hand blue, you created an interesting story about the king that wanted to be heard in this century. I look forward to what he's going to tell the doctors.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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Thank you sweetwoodjax, for your kind review. Part 2 is now on the front page and available to read, Richard has plenty to say. Regards Mel.
Comment from rmj09
The focus King Richard III. The storyline development after the discovery of the skeletal remains, experts study them to prove they are the remains of the king. Two of them have been experiencing the same feelings of someone or something was with them. Listening to the recording of what she had done a deeper more masculine voice is heard.
The hook whose voice was caught on the recording?
The dialogue is clear and developing the personalities. The narrative shows the action to discover whose voice they are hearing.
The emotion I felt interest in where the story is heading.
Keep on writing.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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The focus King Richard III. The storyline development after the discovery of the skeletal remains, experts study them to prove they are the remains of the king. Two of them have been experiencing the same feelings of someone or something was with them. Listening to the recording of what she had done a deeper more masculine voice is heard.
The hook whose voice was caught on the recording?
The dialogue is clear and developing the personalities. The narrative shows the action to discover whose voice they are hearing.
The emotion I felt interest in where the story is heading.
Keep on writing.
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Thank you rmj09, for your kind and informative review. I thank you also for reading and taking the time. :) Mel.
Comment from Sunie617
So easy to read and interesting and suspenseful enough to make me go to the first chapter and look forward to the next chapters. A definite bookmark. Looking forward to the next chapter
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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So easy to read and interesting and suspenseful enough to make me go to the first chapter and look forward to the next chapters. A definite bookmark. Looking forward to the next chapter
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Sunie617 for your kind review and taking the time. :) mel.
