Tell me where you'll be?
A love song.87 total reviews
Comment from amada
Great work, it's always an occasion, and a joy to read about Jesus. This rhyming words are sincere and fitting. My fave
" If I could help you hear Him, if only you'd agree,
My Savior's need to love you, His friend and brother be. "
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Great work, it's always an occasion, and a joy to read about Jesus. This rhyming words are sincere and fitting. My fave
" If I could help you hear Him, if only you'd agree,
My Savior's need to love you, His friend and brother be. "
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you Amada for this lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very devout and inspirational spiritual song.
The joy and faith expressed in the Saviour is almost tangible.
The chorus is very effective as it repeats and adds depth
to the message of redemption.
:-) Shirley
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A very devout and inspirational spiritual song.
The joy and faith expressed in the Saviour is almost tangible.
The chorus is very effective as it repeats and adds depth
to the message of redemption.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this outstanding review, comments and stars, bless you Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
This has good rhythm and I like each slightly different chorus that invites the reader to get closer to Jesus.
This would be a good praise song.
The picture shows the love and kindness of the man expressed in the poem.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
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This has good rhythm and I like each slightly different chorus that invites the reader to get closer to Jesus.
This would be a good praise song.
The picture shows the love and kindness of the man expressed in the poem.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for these great words and lovely review, blessings, Roy.
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Ant time, Roy.
Joan
Comment from mikemagine
Wonderful, Roy! This is a glorious work that prompts believers and non-believers to think! This is very well written, and I expect it could it could easily be put to music - as seems to be the main intention... Great too that you added scripture verses!!
Peace!
Mike
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Wonderful, Roy! This is a glorious work that prompts believers and non-believers to think! This is very well written, and I expect it could it could easily be put to music - as seems to be the main intention... Great too that you added scripture verses!!
Peace!
Mike
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thanks Mike, for the wonderfully uplifting reviews comments and stars, appreciate it blessings, Roy.
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You bet, Roy!!
Mike
Comment from elizvinod
I am waiting for that moment to see him face to face and to hear his words of grace. Waiting for him to wipe away my tears. Hoping on his forgiveness I wait for that day. Very great poem.
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I am waiting for that moment to see him face to face and to hear his words of grace. Waiting for him to wipe away my tears. Hoping on his forgiveness I wait for that day. Very great poem.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you, my friend for making this post worthwhile, appreciation is yours, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Irish Rain
Love the entire poem, but especially the line...'How much He longs to free you...', because that is truly His desire, not to enslave us in rules, but to free us in beauty, love, and truth...blessings.
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Love the entire poem, but especially the line...'How much He longs to free you...', because that is truly His desire, not to enslave us in rules, but to free us in beauty, love, and truth...blessings.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
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Amen Judy, uplifting comments, inspirational stars and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, royowen, I bet this song was a hit for you. I love the question of where will you be. I went to Tribulation House tonight and it was wonderful. I pray the drama they put on will save many lives.
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this is an excellent write, royowen, I bet this song was a hit for you. I love the question of where will you be. I went to Tribulation House tonight and it was wonderful. I pray the drama they put on will save many lives.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
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There are lots of Christian artists who are promoting the kingdom, they need our prayers, great review, thank you. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Gladness
Great work in this song/poem. I love how it shows the longing of Jesus for the souls of men.
Noticed a couple typos in the author notes:
1Cor. 2:9 "mo eye has conceived" (no)
John 10:28 ..."no one ca snatch" (can)
Again, I loved the poem :)
Anita
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Great work in this song/poem. I love how it shows the longing of Jesus for the souls of men.
Noticed a couple typos in the author notes:
1Cor. 2:9 "mo eye has conceived" (no)
John 10:28 ..."no one ca snatch" (can)
Again, I loved the poem :)
Anita
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Anita, firstly the most uplifting review, comments and wonderful stars, and the typos, blessings, Roy
Comment from Aussie
Nice to know in these uncertain times - they can kill our body but our soul belongs to God. I enjoyed your song (wish you could have added it to music for us to play. Well done Roy. Blessed be.
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Nice to know in these uncertain times - they can kill our body but our soul belongs to God. I enjoyed your song (wish you could have added it to music for us to play. Well done Roy. Blessed be.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks Kay, for the wonderful review, I'll have to learn how to post it as a digital recording, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ninap2
This is beautiful - a poem of faith and hopes for others to hear God's message. It is right under our noses I think. Your picture fits like a puzzle piece. Thanks for sharing a most important message. -Nina
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This is beautiful - a poem of faith and hopes for others to hear God's message. It is right under our noses I think. Your picture fits like a puzzle piece. Thanks for sharing a most important message. -Nina
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Nina fo this wonderful review and comments, Roy.
