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Comment from forestport12
When I first look I read the last paragraph from the other chapter and it reminds me or strikes me how you incorporated all the senses, something consistent in your writing. Your plot here is deepening with tangled relationships and you fuse emotion with character/dialogue.Yes, I remember Nathan and parts of the story.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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When I first look I read the last paragraph from the other chapter and it reminds me or strikes me how you incorporated all the senses, something consistent in your writing. Your plot here is deepening with tangled relationships and you fuse emotion with character/dialogue.Yes, I remember Nathan and parts of the story.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for this fine review. I'm glad you haven't forgotten my characters. I'm writing chapters constantly now, so my readers don't have to wait so long for the next installment.
Comment from mjac777
Margaret had Champaign chilling (champagne) you have it spelled wrong in another part as well.
Whew! Doesn't get too much hotter than this!
((Wiping brow))
This was very good writing,amahra. Perfect mix of dialogue and text to keep the plot moving forward. You had me from the start.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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Margaret had Champaign chilling (champagne) you have it spelled wrong in another part as well.
Whew! Doesn't get too much hotter than this!
((Wiping brow))
This was very good writing,amahra. Perfect mix of dialogue and text to keep the plot moving forward. You had me from the start.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014
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thank you very much mjac.
Comment from c_lucas
Nate has proved he has a weakness in his character and deserves whatever Grace wants to dish out. Marriage is a sacred vow that should not be broken on any account. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Nate has proved he has a weakness in his character and deserves whatever Grace wants to dish out. Marriage is a sacred vow that should not be broken on any account. This is very well written.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you Charlie. I agree.
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You're welcome, Amahra. Charlie
Comment from sibhus
Hmmm, I can see why Romance novels are so popular, they really seem to sizzle with a real pop. Well written chapter with some crisp dialogue that seems very real. I t has a good pace that makes for an easy and enjoyable read. Again, good chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Hmmm, I can see why Romance novels are so popular, they really seem to sizzle with a real pop. Well written chapter with some crisp dialogue that seems very real. I t has a good pace that makes for an easy and enjoyable read. Again, good chapter.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you sibhus. Glad you stopped by.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What a great chapter to return with! Margaret is a selfish bitch. Too bad Nate has no will power.. he was wrong. He should never have let her seduce him.
A man can't love two women, was his last thought << He's wrong, of course.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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What a great chapter to return with! Margaret is a selfish bitch. Too bad Nate has no will power.. he was wrong. He should never have let her seduce him.
A man can't love two women, was his last thought << He's wrong, of course.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you Phyllis. If you think she's a bitch now read the next chapter. LOL
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed this well written episode, a pretty torrid affair, I'm glad the sex wasn't explicit, otherwise I would have put It down! But then there would have been a warning! You're book was absorbingly written, with frenetic activity right from the beginning! It is tastefully descriptive,, nicely scribed, it was captivating, the characters were well defined and believable, I enjoyed it, well done, blessings, Roy,
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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I enjoyed this well written episode, a pretty torrid affair, I'm glad the sex wasn't explicit, otherwise I would have put It down! But then there would have been a warning! You're book was absorbingly written, with frenetic activity right from the beginning! It is tastefully descriptive,, nicely scribed, it was captivating, the characters were well defined and believable, I enjoyed it, well done, blessings, Roy,
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much Roy. You indeed read this story. I really appreciate your reading it and your comments. Blessings to you, my dear.
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You're welcome Amahra, Roy,