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Comment from mfowler
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Excellent. Impacting immediately.
You only really get a moment to feel a 1-9-1 poem, and this hit me.
Emotion in the 'why'; irony in the 'word'
How many people say that? Usally people who don't get listened to. I could feel the anger here.
I love how you hung the word 'word' in the last line; like it is the last word. Clever.
Good luck with this.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    Your comments made my day. Thanks so much!...Glad you noticed the last word...
Comment from rama devi
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Good one, with the last word being the last word--which gives a poetic and dramatic emphasis on the point. An excellent entry for the 1-9-1 contest. I thought this had to rhyme (in old prompts it did) but in this one it does not seem to require it, so good job. Good luck!
Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    Rama Devi, Your comments made me feel great, and I thank you so very much.Yes, I was hoping the last word would be noticed...;0). Blessings
reply by rama devi on 24-Aug-2014
    Yay! Glad you enjoyed! Blessings, rd
Comment from adewpearl
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Your post is in good 1/9/1 syllable count as required by this contest
good alliterative pairing of why and word
good pairing of art and words
good use of enjambment to make this one continuous sentence
Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    Brooke, I always appreciate your comments. Thanks so very much.
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Author, ah yes, those famous words which have spewed from many a mans/womans lips during or at the end of a heated arguement, Great entry and I wish you luck.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    Thanks, Eric! I loved your response.
reply by Eric1 on 23-Aug-2014
    You are so welcome my friend.
Comment from Fandoodle
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A stop and listen and to the point verse. Thanks for sharing your work. Perfect little ditty for the 1-9-1 theme.
Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    LOL...loved your words...I am so glad you wrote.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent 1 9 1 poem, mystery writer, and it is the truth. my husband will have his say and when I start to say something he says i'm defending myself...aaaahhhhh. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    LOL...I am still giggling as I read what you said! again! Thank you!
Comment from desire333
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This is the truth, and it happens all the time! Almost impossible to stop :) It defiantly make one think. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    Thanks so very much...(.I guess the last word should be Thanks!)
Comment from ShadPep2
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You followed the pattern exactly. The picture with your poem matches the words perfectly. When we try to get that last word in it does often end in an argument. Great job!

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
    Thanks for your great comments. I really appreciate them...