Animated Stills
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Best Foot"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from TubaTiger
The rhyme is perfect. The image is enjoyable. The entire poem is not only a great message, but also an enjoyable joke. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
The rhyme is perfect. The image is enjoyable. The entire poem is not only a great message, but also an enjoyable joke. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from doris1022
witty but trees have roots and knees. nice photo the poem is lacking attention. more like a joke. keep trying you'll get better.
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2012
witty but trees have roots and knees. nice photo the poem is lacking attention. more like a joke. keep trying you'll get better.
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2012
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Thank for your criticism. I'll keep trying
Comment from EMB
LOL This is certainly a poem that I would say was inspired by the photograph. The words are wise, and they are words not all will be fortunate enough to appreciate, leaving this world before ever reaching a ripe age. I found these words to be most comforting.
Excellent work, my friend. :)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
LOL This is certainly a poem that I would say was inspired by the photograph. The words are wise, and they are words not all will be fortunate enough to appreciate, leaving this world before ever reaching a ripe age. I found these words to be most comforting.
Excellent work, my friend. :)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you Edward. Glad you could enjoy it!
Comment from faithin01
Oh wow! You were right when you said animated still. Great picture and your choice of words to describe it was good also. I love taking pictures of beautiful things and that my friend is a beautiful thing. I didn't find any grammar or spelling issues. Thanks again for sharing this. Keep it up, you do Great work!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
Oh wow! You were right when you said animated still. Great picture and your choice of words to describe it was good also. I love taking pictures of beautiful things and that my friend is a beautiful thing. I didn't find any grammar or spelling issues. Thanks again for sharing this. Keep it up, you do Great work!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your encouragement
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello Treishel. Really cool image of the tree. It reminds me of the tree at the Ta Prohm temple, right outside of Seim Reap, Cambodia. It was a magnificent site to see how the tree roots just seemed to kick down the stones and grow right through them.
Anyhow, I enjoyed your verse especially when I could clearly see the tree stump and it sure looks like a foot.
The part though after "ancient age, and you have a tangled root....Time to untangle your roots and put your best foot forward...How about this one? Just an idea, but hey....I liked your verse just as well. Cheers.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
Hello Treishel. Really cool image of the tree. It reminds me of the tree at the Ta Prohm temple, right outside of Seim Reap, Cambodia. It was a magnificent site to see how the tree roots just seemed to kick down the stones and grow right through them.
Anyhow, I enjoyed your verse especially when I could clearly see the tree stump and it sure looks like a foot.
The part though after "ancient age, and you have a tangled root....Time to untangle your roots and put your best foot forward...How about this one? Just an idea, but hey....I liked your verse just as well. Cheers.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you Benjamin. I love Tree roots and trees in general. Sounds like you do too. I'll have other very interesting roots posted from time to time.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is beautiful, inspirational, motivating and cheering. Your message is clearly delivered even though you wrote only four lines of poetry. That is real gifted-ness. kudos
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
This is beautiful, inspirational, motivating and cheering. Your message is clearly delivered even though you wrote only four lines of poetry. That is real gifted-ness. kudos
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your review and encouragement Perp
Comment from Ekim777
I guessed you were going to do something with your best foot.It would have been nice if you had rhymed the opening couplet. What about "And life has reached the ancient stage." Of course if rhymes are too smooth they become pretentious. Good luck - Ekim777
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
I guessed you were going to do something with your best foot.It would have been nice if you had rhymed the opening couplet. What about "And life has reached the ancient stage." Of course if rhymes are too smooth they become pretentious. Good luck - Ekim777
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thanks for you review and wishes, Ekim
Comment from Bill Schott
Brilliant interpretation on the picture. I can feel the sense of wanting to continue to produce even when it looks like, and sometimes people think that you are done.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
Brilliant interpretation on the picture. I can feel the sense of wanting to continue to produce even when it looks like, and sometimes people think that you are done.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the observation, Bill
Comment from Rondeno
Utterly unexceptionable and mildly pleasant, this poem would have garnered more plaudits, one feels, if "age" hadn't been rhymed with itself.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
Utterly unexceptionable and mildly pleasant, this poem would have garnered more plaudits, one feels, if "age" hadn't been rhymed with itself.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your reading and review. I see your point.
Comment from chromeangel33
Very impressive! Your poem has accentuated your picture nicely! You definitely have a knack for creativity! I also like that it says a lot without a lot of words! Great job!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
Very impressive! Your poem has accentuated your picture nicely! You definitely have a knack for creativity! I also like that it says a lot without a lot of words! Great job!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much