X Marks the Spot
Bob and Bill go fishing...25 total reviews
Comment from cjvaughn
Cute! I liked the fun rhythm of this. Great character and humor in a short space, a perfect entry for this contest. The art work goes well with the theme of the poem. Loks like a winner to me!
Nothing to suggest as far as SPAG.
Good luck, CJ
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Cute! I liked the fun rhythm of this. Great character and humor in a short space, a perfect entry for this contest. The art work goes well with the theme of the poem. Loks like a winner to me!
Nothing to suggest as far as SPAG.
Good luck, CJ
Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Thanks CJ - glad you enjoyed my little joke. As for winning... there are some very good entries in this contest.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Brilliant! Nice to start my day off with a laugh and this did it for me. Very neatly written, flows great and the humour is perfect. Loved it.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Brilliant! Nice to start my day off with a laugh and this did it for me. Very neatly written, flows great and the humour is perfect. Loved it.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Avril. Glad you enjoyed my little joke in a poem.
Comment from peggles
This certanley made me laugh
Sounds just like someone I know he is a fisher man also and as daft as a brush
To have done this from a prompt is very good
Iwish you luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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This certanley made me laugh
Sounds just like someone I know he is a fisher man also and as daft as a brush
To have done this from a prompt is very good
Iwish you luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your kind review!
Comment from reneebraxton
Bill and bob are the kind of people that would brighten anyone's day.It was humorous!I needed that and it felt great to read.I also liked the art work.You are very talented!
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Bill and bob are the kind of people that would brighten anyone's day.It was humorous!I needed that and it felt great to read.I also liked the art work.You are very talented!
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Such high praise to go with only two stars??? :o((
Comment from Kingsland
This poem was just hilarious. I got a very big laugh out of reading this piece. You have a great sense of humor. It really comes forth here. This was my pleasure to have laughed and written this response for this excellent piece of poetic humor... John
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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This poem was just hilarious. I got a very big laugh out of reading this piece. You have a great sense of humor. It really comes forth here. This was my pleasure to have laughed and written this response for this excellent piece of poetic humor... John
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your kind review!
