Sometimes in Life
Words to think on26 total reviews
Comment from Chris Tee
Firstly, I agree with with your comment.
Then I must congratulate you for this excellent piece of art.
The rhyming rhythm and flow was flawless.
Very factual as well.
I salute you effort!!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
Firstly, I agree with with your comment.
Then I must congratulate you for this excellent piece of art.
The rhyming rhythm and flow was flawless.
Very factual as well.
I salute you effort!!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your great review, I am glad that you liked it so very much. Take care.
Larry
Comment from The Stranger
well Larry welcome back my friend, Ihave missed your input greatly, and what a great way to announce your return witha sweet uplifting poem of spiritiual awakening
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
well Larry welcome back my friend, Ihave missed your input greatly, and what a great way to announce your return witha sweet uplifting poem of spiritiual awakening
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you my friend I know I have been sort of wishy washy lately on being around but maybe I am back alot more often now. Going through some things in my life which caused me to write this poem that you love, so it was felt from the heart as you might say. Thanks again for reading it and I hope to write more of these kinds of poems as well. Take care.
Larry
Comment from Kevin C
Very well written, great words and advice. I liked the way you lay out your work and bring it all together. Good lessons can be taken from this.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
Very well written, great words and advice. I liked the way you lay out your work and bring it all together. Good lessons can be taken from this.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words, I am so glad that you enjoyed it. I have wrote other Christian and Spiritual poetry, but hoping to do more of this in the future, take care.
Larry
Comment from Ronni
Perfect affirmation of belief, trust, love, and
patiernce through Him, to see us through struggles
or waywayd turns in life. You have captured it all
here Larry, in inspiring and consoling spirit and
encompassing inspiration for all. Love the artwork,
so befitting of theme and tone. Fantastic write.
Thanks for sharing. God Bless!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
Perfect affirmation of belief, trust, love, and
patiernce through Him, to see us through struggles
or waywayd turns in life. You have captured it all
here Larry, in inspiring and consoling spirit and
encompassing inspiration for all. Love the artwork,
so befitting of theme and tone. Fantastic write.
Thanks for sharing. God Bless!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much Ronni for the great words, was not sure to put this under Spiritual or Self Improvement, I choose the latter for it seemed a bit more befitting. I would like to write others like this so we shall see how it goes.
Larry
Comment from RebelRose
This is so beautifully written. Great imagery and rhyming scheme. The only thing I would suggest is that you make the font just a bit larger for an easier read.
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011
This is so beautifully written. Great imagery and rhyming scheme. The only thing I would suggest is that you make the font just a bit larger for an easier read.
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011
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I think I made it bigger now please let me know if that is good for you, thank you so much.
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Not a lot bigger but much better. I think it will be fine now. Good poem.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a straightforward and heartfelt poem of faith with a message that few would refute. It needs a couple of minor edits, but I very much enjoyed the read:
"Sure they're be problems along our way" - I think 'they're' should be 'there'll'.
"He,ll see you through" - comma should be an apostrophe.
Mike
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011
This is a straightforward and heartfelt poem of faith with a message that few would refute. It needs a couple of minor edits, but I very much enjoyed the read:
"Sure they're be problems along our way" - I think 'they're' should be 'there'll'.
"He,ll see you through" - comma should be an apostrophe.
Mike
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your review and for sure for catching those mistakes, I very much appreciate that, I took care of those. Take care.