Tantalizing Eyes
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
I guess you could say that Leya and Steven are the meeting point between the clash of two cultures. Leya's lack of understanding on that seems likely to bring her into danger again pretty quickly.
Patrick
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Hi Barbara,
I guess you could say that Leya and Steven are the meeting point between the clash of two cultures. Leya's lack of understanding on that seems likely to bring her into danger again pretty quickly.
Patrick
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Leya gets into more trouble. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Donna Thompson
great job. congratulations on getting your recognized and all time best ribbon yet again. You have a wonderful knack of telling a story with no spags as well. great job
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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great job. congratulations on getting your recognized and all time best ribbon yet again. You have a wonderful knack of telling a story with no spags as well. great job
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Continues to be a great story and I love to read it. It full of action and tension and keeps me reading. I did not find any spag. Good job
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Continues to be a great story and I love to read it. It full of action and tension and keeps me reading. I did not find any spag. Good job
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from hoopinzero
At first I was hesitaint to read this peice only because from the description I thought it would read like a paperback romance novel but as I got into it I found myself lost in a story that is funny, quirky, and serious in all the right places. I plan on going back to the begining of this book and reading it through. Great job.
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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At first I was hesitaint to read this peice only because from the description I thought it would read like a paperback romance novel but as I got into it I found myself lost in a story that is funny, quirky, and serious in all the right places. I plan on going back to the begining of this book and reading it through. Great job.
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I hope I don't disappoint you.
Comment from Thilophian
Dear Barbara Wilkey,
It is a nice chapter. It has beautifully given the idea of the small town jain where Steven spent the night. I appreciate your work. I would like to read more and more of your works. Keep going. You have an enthusiastic reader over here.
Congratulations!
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Dear Barbara Wilkey,
It is a nice chapter. It has beautifully given the idea of the small town jain where Steven spent the night. I appreciate your work. I would like to read more and more of your works. Keep going. You have an enthusiastic reader over here.
Congratulations!
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Connie P
Oh Leya wake up!!! She thinks he won't forgive her and he is chasing her like crazy, spent the night in jail, all to find her. Hope she realizes he really loves her.
Connie
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Oh Leya wake up!!! She thinks he won't forgive her and he is chasing her like crazy, spent the night in jail, all to find her. Hope she realizes he really loves her.
Connie
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Grace19
I just wanted to say that I loved this chapter of your story. I haven't read any of the others as I'm a new member, but if they are as good as this one I will do my best to read the rest.
Keep up the good work :)
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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I just wanted to say that I loved this chapter of your story. I haven't read any of the others as I'm a new member, but if they are as good as this one I will do my best to read the rest.
Keep up the good work :)
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from L.lora
Awe, all things work out
sort of. Interesting
chapter with good descriptions,
complimentary dialogue and
expounding on the problems
of messed up communications
between two peope and the
resulting problems. Very
realistic and well done. no nits
or spags. Lora
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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Awe, all things work out
sort of. Interesting
chapter with good descriptions,
complimentary dialogue and
expounding on the problems
of messed up communications
between two peope and the
resulting problems. Very
realistic and well done. no nits
or spags. Lora
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
Another interesting and well written chapter. I enjoy the mix of narrative and dialogue and the small town setting. Good job and keep writing. i did notice this:
was happening the, sheriff handcuffed him
should be
was happening, the sheriff handcuffed him
Duane
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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barbara.wilkey,
Another interesting and well written chapter. I enjoy the mix of narrative and dialogue and the small town setting. Good job and keep writing. i did notice this:
was happening the, sheriff handcuffed him
should be
was happening, the sheriff handcuffed him
Duane
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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I have changed that area problaby after every review, and I still didn't get it right. GRRRRR(LOL) Thank you for catching, maybe I finally have it right.....
Comment from Josipher32
babrbara.wilkey,
"Ch13, part 3" was another great installment of your book "Tantalizing Eyes" There was well-rounded characterization and a good balance of narration and dialogue.
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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babrbara.wilkey,
"Ch13, part 3" was another great installment of your book "Tantalizing Eyes" There was well-rounded characterization and a good balance of narration and dialogue.
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
