POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from colin
You have written a beautifully poignant short love poem that encapsulates love and devotion totally.Offering your own life to give someone you love theirs ,is love personified.
Excellently written and well done, good luck in the competition,peace be with you...Colin.
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You have written a beautifully poignant short love poem that encapsulates love and devotion totally.Offering your own life to give someone you love theirs ,is love personified.
Excellently written and well done, good luck in the competition,peace be with you...Colin.
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Colin
Thank you for your kind words. I greatly appreciate them. Carol
Comment from StevenJosephBruening
Elegantly and simply put. Full packed with emotion with so few words - well chosen words, I might add. This poem is deep and rich in emotion and excellently written. Great job!
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Elegantly and simply put. Full packed with emotion with so few words - well chosen words, I might add. This poem is deep and rich in emotion and excellently written. Great job!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Steven Thanks for the kind review. I greatly appreciate your comments. Carol
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You are most welcome. It was my pleasure.
~ Steven
Comment from MariJo
Such a loving thought of love in 15 words. Flows well & with so much feeling in so few words. Nothing should be changed.
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Such a loving thought of love in 15 words. Flows well & with so much feeling in so few words. Nothing should be changed.
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Marijo
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very well done. I loved reading everyminute of it and thought it was very heartfelt and very well done. Amazing. Great.
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Very well done. I loved reading everyminute of it and thought it was very heartfelt and very well done. Amazing. Great.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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bozroz
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Carol
Comment from jclark
What a beautiful tribute to love. Your words speak volumes and the picture is a perfect match for such thought provoking lines. Nicely done.
Judy
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What a beautiful tribute to love. Your words speak volumes and the picture is a perfect match for such thought provoking lines. Nicely done.
Judy
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Judy Thank you so much for the kind review and the stars. I was thinking of my 89 yr old parents, married 62 years and never apart. I can't imagine how they will react when something happens to one of them. Thanks again Carol
Comment from fastdigits
Short poems so difficult to review.
However, your fifteen word poem filled
with poignant and heart-felt warmth
is well done, capturing what true
love is all about.
Well done and good luck
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Short poems so difficult to review.
However, your fifteen word poem filled
with poignant and heart-felt warmth
is well done, capturing what true
love is all about.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Fastdigits Thank you for the kind review. I certainly appreciate your comments. Carol
Comment from wierdgrace
so emotional and so excellently written, I loved it,and teared up a bit, enjoyable as it may be, as i know a few who are in that place. thank you for sharing.
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so emotional and so excellently written, I loved it,and teared up a bit, enjoyable as it may be, as i know a few who are in that place. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Wierdgrace I wrote it thinking about my parents. They are 89, married 62 years, and never apart. I can't imagine how one will survive without the other. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from samuelbrody
Carol... Oh, My. You have done it again. In fact, you always do it again. The power of the verse along is mesmerizing; however when coupled with the photo, brilliant. These succinct poems art truly the outflow from a creative spirit which is deep, wide and fully flowing easily to pen such artistry. Nicely done. Michael.
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Carol... Oh, My. You have done it again. In fact, you always do it again. The power of the verse along is mesmerizing; however when coupled with the photo, brilliant. These succinct poems art truly the outflow from a creative spirit which is deep, wide and fully flowing easily to pen such artistry. Nicely done. Michael.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Michael Thanks for the awesome review. It's so kind of you. I wrote the poem, thinking about my parents. They are 89, married 62 years, and never apart. I can't imagine how one will survive if something happens to the other one. Thanks again Carol
Comment from Jewell McChesney
So beautiful! So perfect is this little love poem that says it all in a few words. No greater love is there than this, to give up our lives for another.
Blessings to you in this contest. It's a sure winner.
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So beautiful! So perfect is this little love poem that says it all in a few words. No greater love is there than this, to give up our lives for another.
Blessings to you in this contest. It's a sure winner.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Visionary Poet
Ah to be so sure...I don't have your confidence, but I thank you for your encouragement. I'm not a poet...I simply wrote this from my heart. Thanks again. Carol
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Begin Again ....
What you have written here, under a most appropriate picture, is not only very nice but also thought-provoking.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing it with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Begin Again ....
What you have written here, under a most appropriate picture, is not only very nice but also thought-provoking.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing it with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2009
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Nanette Thanks so much for the kind review. I greatly appreciate your comments. Carol
