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Comment from Alexander E Poet
Dear poet, Wow! I thought this was great a great piece of poetry very well written piece, not hard to follow. Nice picture selection, a wonderful take on God. I love the form too, . Excellent wonderful poem and beautifully worded, There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Dear poet, Wow! I thought this was great a great piece of poetry very well written piece, not hard to follow. Nice picture selection, a wonderful take on God. I love the form too, . Excellent wonderful poem and beautifully worded, There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Alexander, thank you so much for your kind words, Brooke
Comment from DrCarter2001
Good job as usual, with this cinquain. I like that you always use some sort of structure instead of just going willy-nilly free verse. the quick rhyme in 3rd and 5th lines makes this stronger.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Good job as usual, with this cinquain. I like that you always use some sort of structure instead of just going willy-nilly free verse. the quick rhyme in 3rd and 5th lines makes this stronger.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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My mind really doesn't do willy nilly well LOL Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Such a strong powerful poem in this restricted form saying so much I enjoyed this one it is well written reads very well and beautifully presented regards Fuller
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Such a strong powerful poem in this restricted form saying so much I enjoyed this one it is well written reads very well and beautifully presented regards Fuller
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Fuller, thank you for your kind comments, Brooke
Comment from Domino
Hi, Brooke. You know I'm not a lover of author notes, but
'Religion should not divide us - to do good, to be kind, to live in peace with all - there is no religion that owns the rights to those things we all strive to do and be.' - is SO true, Bravo for that!
Your poem isn't my ideal theme, but, for what it is, it's lovely.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Hi, Brooke. You know I'm not a lover of author notes, but
'Religion should not divide us - to do good, to be kind, to live in peace with all - there is no religion that owns the rights to those things we all strive to do and be.' - is SO true, Bravo for that!
Your poem isn't my ideal theme, but, for what it is, it's lovely.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Ray, thank you - for your thoughtfulness and tolerance :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
I'm sitting here, reading your author's notes, nodding away. If I believe in the god Conan (I don't, by the way, just by way of example ;-)), who will smite evil with the sword of my belief, and it leads me to help a blind person cross the road, or hold my temper when it's threatening to burst its banks, then it is worthwhile.
If I believe in Conan and it leads me to run the streets, striking down everyone who doesn't with the carving knife of my belief, that's a bad thing obviously, but that's down to me, not Conan.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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I'm sitting here, reading your author's notes, nodding away. If I believe in the god Conan (I don't, by the way, just by way of example ;-)), who will smite evil with the sword of my belief, and it leads me to help a blind person cross the road, or hold my temper when it's threatening to burst its banks, then it is worthwhile.
If I believe in Conan and it leads me to run the streets, striking down everyone who doesn't with the carving knife of my belief, that's a bad thing obviously, but that's down to me, not Conan.
Mike
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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I totally agree with you - if seeing pink elephants in the room causes someone to lead a life of charity and kindness and compassion, I can go with the flow! Thanks, Brooke
Comment from jadedgemini2
Such a wonderful poem about the history behind the day. You spoke of it with such eloquence, too.
I think you did a wonderful job!
Jaded:)
And I think you picked a better topic to write about today than what you first thought of as well:)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Such a wonderful poem about the history behind the day. You spoke of it with such eloquence, too.
I think you did a wonderful job!
Jaded:)
And I think you picked a better topic to write about today than what you first thought of as well:)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Jaded, thanks for your wonderful review, Brooke
Comment from Sixteezkid
Brooke, your cinquains are always a pleasure to read. You pack them full! :-))
This is a beautiful Easter poem. Loved your rhyme, also. Excellent image!!
And a very powerful title.
Well done!
Sue
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Brooke, your cinquains are always a pleasure to read. You pack them full! :-))
This is a beautiful Easter poem. Loved your rhyme, also. Excellent image!!
And a very powerful title.
Well done!
Sue
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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Sue, thank you!! Brooke
Comment from aviddbrut
brooke, very nice. yes, he brought a different kind of victory...one not easily anticipated. your author's notes are exceptional. wonderful thoughts. may you have a blessed holy week.
david
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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brooke, very nice. yes, he brought a different kind of victory...one not easily anticipated. your author's notes are exceptional. wonderful thoughts. may you have a blessed holy week.
david
Comment Written 06-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009
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David, I appreciate this most thoughtful response,Brooke
Comment from earthlybeing
Beautiful poem filled with deep meaning for me also. I love your notes though. So true that no matter what one believes we should all pray for peace. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2009
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Beautiful poem filled with deep meaning for me also. I love your notes though. So true that no matter what one believes we should all pray for peace. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 05-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2009
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Jeanette, thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Brooke,
a lovely poem with a message that brought a message of the sacrifice Jesus made for us a sinners.
Love the picture of the lily
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2009
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Hello Brooke,
a lovely poem with a message that brought a message of the sacrifice Jesus made for us a sinners.
Love the picture of the lily
Gert
Comment Written 05-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2009
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Gert, as always, I appreciate your kind comments, Brooke
