Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "If I Controlled the Hands of Time"Poems employing this musical, repeating form
86 total reviews
Comment from Twomoon
goodmorning, and this was just a lovely piece. I enjoyed the whole of the words, the motion and the emotion in this poem! Such a unique and wonderful way to say so much, not simple, yet simple in its message, but deep in its vision, if that makes sense?? smile, good luck, lovely piece, much love twomoon
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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goodmorning, and this was just a lovely piece. I enjoyed the whole of the words, the motion and the emotion in this poem! Such a unique and wonderful way to say so much, not simple, yet simple in its message, but deep in its vision, if that makes sense?? smile, good luck, lovely piece, much love twomoon
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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I think it makes perfect sense and I humbly accept such a lovely compliment!!! Thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from aviddbrut
brooke, this is very well done. troilets are new to me and so it takes me a while to get the feel of them, but this flows well, it paints a lovely picture. good job.
david
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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brooke, this is very well done. troilets are new to me and so it takes me a while to get the feel of them, but this flows well, it paints a lovely picture. good job.
david
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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David, they are brand new to me too, but I looked them up, and they date back 700 years. I guess it was about time to try one! Thanks, Brooke :-)
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Brooke. This is another very well written triolet. I am not a fan of them but I really did enjoy this one very much. Good luck
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Hi Brooke. This is another very well written triolet. I am not a fan of them but I really did enjoy this one very much. Good luck
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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They are not my favorite form by far, but I'd never written one before so decided to expand my horizons - thanks, Brooke :-)
Comment from Sasha
This is lovely. I had to read the definition of Triolet several times to completely understand it's meaning. Considering I cannot even balance my checkbook, I think it is amazing that anyone can write something so lovely, with rules to follow. I think you did a very nice job with this and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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This is lovely. I had to read the definition of Triolet several times to completely understand it's meaning. Considering I cannot even balance my checkbook, I think it is amazing that anyone can write something so lovely, with rules to follow. I think you did a very nice job with this and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your supportive and complimentary comments! I truly appreciate your review :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
You have done a maravellous job with this triolet, Brooke. It reads perfectly and it gives such positive energy. But then, most of your poems do. very nicely done indeed. Rose.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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You have done a maravellous job with this triolet, Brooke. It reads perfectly and it gives such positive energy. But then, most of your poems do. very nicely done indeed. Rose.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Rose, thank you for this kind review - I so appreciate your continued support - I look forward to new chapters of your book, soon I hope!! Brooke
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Just for you, Brooke - New chapter just launched. Thanks for the gentle prod.
Comment from Gramma Kathy
Well done! I looked at this writing prompt and came up totally blank. You have shown me how to take rigid rules and turn them into a work of beauty.
The artwork you chose adds depth to your triolet, as do the colours.
I am impressed.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Well done! I looked at this writing prompt and came up totally blank. You have shown me how to take rigid rules and turn them into a work of beauty.
The artwork you chose adds depth to your triolet, as do the colours.
I am impressed.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Your encouraging comments are always so welcome!!! Brooke
Comment from jeslaf
Brooke, this is very good...makes this reader want to know more about the who, what, why and where of that day you'd like to recreate! I felt the longing, regret. :)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Brooke, this is very good...makes this reader want to know more about the who, what, why and where of that day you'd like to recreate! I felt the longing, regret. :)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your most thoughtful comments, Brooke
Comment from FredCollingwood
If we go back in time, do we get younger? You pose an interesting concept. I think it would require a bit of time to come up with what one would do. Great job!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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If we go back in time, do we get younger? You pose an interesting concept. I think it would require a bit of time to come up with what one would do. Great job!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Fred, thank you for your intriguing review :-) Brooke
Comment from Mike K2
Boy! Do I know that feeling, which is all to fleeting in my life. I enjoyed this well written poem and indeed it is not only romantic, but has a air of timelessness about it.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Boy! Do I know that feeling, which is all to fleeting in my life. I enjoyed this well written poem and indeed it is not only romantic, but has a air of timelessness about it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Thank you, Mike, for another encouraging review. Brooke
Comment from Nicnac
Perfect artwork! Fireworks and passion. :)
I really like this, Brooke. Such a creative approach to writing about bringing back the feelings of passionate love.
Beautiful!
~Nic
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Perfect artwork! Fireworks and passion. :)
I really like this, Brooke. Such a creative approach to writing about bringing back the feelings of passionate love.
Beautiful!
~Nic
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Nic, thank you for yet another gracious review! Brooke
