Dalliance
a whimsical romance86 total reviews
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is so sweet and so tenderly written. I fell in love with your grandparents. Your poem reads quite well and the rhythm and rhyme are perfect. Nice work. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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This is so sweet and so tenderly written. I fell in love with your grandparents. Your poem reads quite well and the rhythm and rhyme are perfect. Nice work. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Susanne - thanks so much. You're most kind, Brooke
Comment from earthlybeing
Oh this is a heart warming and lovely poem. Funny how things work out and something so innocent leads to a life long love. Great tribute to them and their meeting. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Oh this is a heart warming and lovely poem. Funny how things work out and something so innocent leads to a life long love. Great tribute to them and their meeting. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Jeanette, thank you for your warm comments, Brooke
Comment from Lois Delaney
You deserve a six here, adewpearl. I just loved this one. You work so hard, and I really do appreciate you. Great job at keeping up in the ranks. You go girl!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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You deserve a six here, adewpearl. I just loved this one. You work so hard, and I really do appreciate you. Great job at keeping up in the ranks. You go girl!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much!!! If you like this, you should like the brand new one I just posted too. Brooke :-)
Comment from skye
Very cute and clever, with strong rhymes, great interior images, and a wonderful last line.... unexpectedly real and sweet.
Fun to read. Your artwork is also well chosen.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Very cute and clever, with strong rhymes, great interior images, and a wonderful last line.... unexpectedly real and sweet.
Fun to read. Your artwork is also well chosen.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Skye, thank you!! Your warm response is most appreciated, Brooke
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Awe, isn't it wonderful, the very moment two people meet, not knowing that they are penning a novel of romance that spans a lifetime! Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Awe, isn't it wonderful, the very moment two people meet, not knowing that they are penning a novel of romance that spans a lifetime! Good job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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What a lovely response - thank you!!
Comment from teafor2
adewpearl--A fortuitous meeting developed into
a lifetime partnership according to these rhym-
ing quatrains. Both of these protagonists engag-
ed in subtle, but coy wooing tactics. It is ap-
parent that much profound banter was exchanged
between these two amorists while they were sit-
ting "...upon the park bench." This enchanting
story has all the prerequisite ingredients: a be-
ginning, middle and end. teafor2
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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adewpearl--A fortuitous meeting developed into
a lifetime partnership according to these rhym-
ing quatrains. Both of these protagonists engag-
ed in subtle, but coy wooing tactics. It is ap-
parent that much profound banter was exchanged
between these two amorists while they were sit-
ting "...upon the park bench." This enchanting
story has all the prerequisite ingredients: a be-
ginning, middle and end. teafor2
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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thank you for this most thoughtful review, Brooke
Comment from mslyla216
Lovely. Absolutely whimsical, entertaining and great story material. Your rhyme and rythm are easy to follow as one reads this aloud, as I did. I see Grandma and Gramps sitting there now. Good poem. mslyla
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Lovely. Absolutely whimsical, entertaining and great story material. Your rhyme and rythm are easy to follow as one reads this aloud, as I did. I see Grandma and Gramps sitting there now. Good poem. mslyla
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Thank you for this warm review!! Brooke
Comment from AliSmith
Very sweet and touching. I enjoyed it immensely. You did such a nice job of keeping the meter and rhyme. You told a great story as well. I don't know where the idea came from, but it was great. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Very sweet and touching. I enjoyed it immensely. You did such a nice job of keeping the meter and rhyme. You told a great story as well. I don't know where the idea came from, but it was great. Keep it up.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I wish I knew where most of my ideas come from!! LOL Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from gargoyle socks
This is a very sweet poem. I like the last line, it makes me think about life and how if our grandparents and parents had never met, we might not be here, or might not be who we are today. Nice poem :)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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This is a very sweet poem. I like the last line, it makes me think about life and how if our grandparents and parents had never met, we might not be here, or might not be who we are today. Nice poem :)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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I have written an entire poem on what you're saying called Solveig's Daughter, a Romance - I'd love for you to find it in my portfolio. Thank you so much for this kind review, Brooke
Comment from Lady & Louis
That last line made me laugh aloud! I enjoyed the whole light-hearted piece - especially the angle that they were both playing, neither was a victim - but the turn at the end was very neat and gave it that littel filip. Nicely done, Brooke!
Louise :)))
PS himself and I indulged in a bit of dalliance last night, so this is well timed!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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That last line made me laugh aloud! I enjoyed the whole light-hearted piece - especially the angle that they were both playing, neither was a victim - but the turn at the end was very neat and gave it that littel filip. Nicely done, Brooke!
Louise :)))
PS himself and I indulged in a bit of dalliance last night, so this is well timed!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Louise - children could be reading!!! LOL Thanks so much, Brooke
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LOL given that Louis and I have honorary nieces who look in at this site, I wouldn't be at all surprised!
