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Comment from racingponies
Beautiful. I think you've done an excellent job. It follows the contest and the picture you selected fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Beautiful. I think you've done an excellent job. It follows the contest and the picture you selected fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Hello racingponies, Thank you for the great review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from c_lucas
A life without love is a tragedy waiting to happen. A very sad thought-provoking poem with very good imagery and an excellent descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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A life without love is a tragedy waiting to happen. A very sad thought-provoking poem with very good imagery and an excellent descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Hello c_lucas, thank you for the great review and yes, a life without love, is a tragedy waiting to happen, espcially if one has never felt love as a child and into adulthood. Regards, LateBloomer
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You're welcome, LB. Charlie
Comment from Jnetgame
I like your six word story entry. I entered the last contest like this. I wish you well in the contest. No SPAG noticed.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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I like your six word story entry. I entered the last contest like this. I wish you well in the contest. No SPAG noticed.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Hello Jnetgame, Thank you for your review. These six-word contests are a lot of fun. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from MercyWrites
I like you entree. It matches the picture of a lonely
woman in pain. The words also sound sad. Thanks for sharing that information about Ernest Hemingway. I love
reading tidbits about his life.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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I like you entree. It matches the picture of a lonely
woman in pain. The words also sound sad. Thanks for sharing that information about Ernest Hemingway. I love
reading tidbits about his life.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello MercyWrites,
Thank you for the great review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Penpal
This is a very expressive piece. Poignant, and so lonely. Loneliness is a horrible thing. Though, very sad, this piece reflects a sincere story of wanton need for love. Needs repair...is so perfect.
I also appreciate your awesome notes. That too is sad, and paints a tragedy.
Penpal
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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This is a very expressive piece. Poignant, and so lonely. Loneliness is a horrible thing. Though, very sad, this piece reflects a sincere story of wanton need for love. Needs repair...is so perfect.
I also appreciate your awesome notes. That too is sad, and paints a tragedy.
Penpal
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello Penpal, Yes, I write about the world around me and people who I encounter. When a child is not loved, they grow up always feeling unloved. Even after they find someone who truly loves them, they still have doubt and always feel alone, loney, unworthy. Thank you for your insightful review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from eveeator
very good you have told a story in just six words, excellent entry for the contest and I wish you luck with this entry, keep well
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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very good you have told a story in just six words, excellent entry for the contest and I wish you luck with this entry, keep well
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Thank you, eveeator, for your great review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
You have done well with this one telling a sad story in six words the art work matches very well good luck in the contest my friend regards Fuller
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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You have done well with this one telling a sad story in six words the art work matches very well good luck in the contest my friend regards Fuller
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello Fuller, Thank you for your great review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from MissCellanea
Speaks volumes in a mere six words. Raw, emotional, thought-provoking. Coupled with that photo, overall tone tugs at the heart. Best wishes for the contest. Sue
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Speaks volumes in a mere six words. Raw, emotional, thought-provoking. Coupled with that photo, overall tone tugs at the heart. Best wishes for the contest. Sue
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello suZque, thank you for your great review. yes, this is a sad one. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from adewpearl
an effective six word entry into this challenge - it certainly is a tale of a person who feels emotionally unfulfilled and never the recipient of a healing love.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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an effective six word entry into this challenge - it certainly is a tale of a person who feels emotionally unfulfilled and never the recipient of a healing love.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello adewpearl, thank you for your insightful review. regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello LateBloomer this is a great question WHY and a pathos six words
Make one think
The best of luck to you in this contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello LateBloomer this is a great question WHY and a pathos six words
Make one think
The best of luck to you in this contest.
Gert
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Hello Gert, Thank you for your great review. The can be such a sad place - so many unwanted and unloved children who grow up always feeling insecure even when loves does find them. they take those emotional scars into adulthood and their marriages. regards, LateBloomer
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You are so welme my Fanstory friend.
Take care LateBloomer.
Gert
