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First impressions can be wrong
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Gert sherwood
Hello redrider good story, they only place I thought was a little strange was is the beginning when you said-
She wasn?t the prettiest girl in the club, she wasn't even the prettiest one at her table.
then when Kevin said-
Well, cut a guy some slack, would you ((Pretty girl like you))??
the rest of your story looks fine the way you told it in the 3rd person and a great closure.
Gert
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2008
Thanks, Gert. By that time Kevin had revised his opinion of her. Besides, people often think one thing and say another, if you know what I mean. I appreciate the thoughtful review.
reply by Gert sherwood on 20-Sep-2008
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