Stalker
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Appointment"Jim and Lenny are hired to find a stalker
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Comment from chaswriter
You are right, before I can really comment on this chapter, I really to go back and read the other chapters. I like the pace and flow but got lost in the storyline but that is my fault. Keep it rolling. Charlie.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008
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You are right, before I can really comment on this chapter, I really to go back and read the other chapters. I like the pace and flow but got lost in the storyline but that is my fault. Keep it rolling. Charlie.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008
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Hey Charlie,
Well, coming into the middle of a book is difficult under the best circumstances, but this particular piece is part of a large chapter and we're about to take off. Actually, even if you just follow along from here, you'll be in for a fun spin around LA.
Thank you so much for the R&R and your kind comments,
Best,
Gayle
