The Pond
Let's go ice skating.31 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
Wow. I love this. It says so much in so few words. I don't really understand the rules of Haiku but I know what I like and to me this is excellent. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Wow. I love this. It says so much in so few words. I don't really understand the rules of Haiku but I know what I like and to me this is excellent. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from jessizero
I liked your poem, and the syllable count was correct. It seems a little weird that you mention the water being frozen then say it was cold. Still, it was good. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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I liked your poem, and the syllable count was correct. It seems a little weird that you mention the water being frozen then say it was cold. Still, it was good. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
If I think the person who was skating was skating on thin ice, and yes the epwater would be a tad coldish, I've never fell in water that cold, but I would imagine it would be awful, well done blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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If I think the person who was skating was skating on thin ice, and yes the epwater would be a tad coldish, I've never fell in water that cold, but I would imagine it would be awful, well done blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
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Wel come
Comment from Janet Foor
I love the artwork of the chilly winter scene and the pond. You have written a lovely haiku for the contest.
Well done Gunner.
Blessings and best of luck
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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I love the artwork of the chilly winter scene and the pond. You have written a lovely haiku for the contest.
Well done Gunner.
Blessings and best of luck
Janet
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Julie Helms
Having fallen through the ice in a pond while ice-skating as a teenager, I was able to relate to this way to well!
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Having fallen through the ice in a pond while ice-skating as a teenager, I was able to relate to this way to well!
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from jim vecchio
I hope someone like James Stewart was there to pull you out! (a nod to "It's A Wonderful Life") I wasn't expecting that last line and I find you're not only a very good writer but have a true sense of humor! Thanks for posting!-Sorry-just have 5 stars today.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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I hope someone like James Stewart was there to pull you out! (a nod to "It's A Wonderful Life") I wasn't expecting that last line and I find you're not only a very good writer but have a true sense of humor! Thanks for posting!-Sorry-just have 5 stars today.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you!!
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Continue your great writing!
Comment from Sabrina H.
What a sweet poem although I couldn't get the picture to show up. It could just be my computer.
I never like the haiku's I come up with but I like that yours beings up sweet memories.
Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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What a sweet poem although I couldn't get the picture to show up. It could just be my computer.
I never like the haiku's I come up with but I like that yours beings up sweet memories.
Best of luck on the contest.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Ben Colder
I love trying to write these things. Mine are always Corney but you seemed to have brought life into yours. Best to you in the contest. Hope you are a winner.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I love trying to write these things. Mine are always Corney but you seemed to have brought life into yours. Best to you in the contest. Hope you are a winner.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from papa55mike
I never was an ice skater but it looks fun. What a wonderfully written poem but I couldn't get the picture to come up. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I never was an ice skater but it looks fun. What a wonderfully written poem but I couldn't get the picture to come up. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good haiku for the challenge. If I'm not mistaken, it seems tragic. I've lived near the Atlantic Ocean most of my life and I think lakes are more dangerous because people don't think they are. Forgive me if I missed the meaning but I do think your descriptive words were very good and that this was well written. Best wishes!
Alex
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is a good haiku for the challenge. If I'm not mistaken, it seems tragic. I've lived near the Atlantic Ocean most of my life and I think lakes are more dangerous because people don't think they are. Forgive me if I missed the meaning but I do think your descriptive words were very good and that this was well written. Best wishes!
Alex
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you!
