The Beginning of the End
A Free verse poem...15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we discover someone's true personality and they are not who we thought they were, it can be devastating as we were blinded by love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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When we discover someone's true personality and they are not who we thought they were, it can be devastating as we were blinded by love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you! This guy even looks like he?s got a smile on his face! Really big jerk! Haha! Thanks Dolly! xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
That is a sad reality but it's good that the narrator knows what kind of person that is and so does not grieve the loss of a love that was never meant to be.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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That is a sad reality but it's good that the narrator knows what kind of person that is and so does not grieve the loss of a love that was never meant to be.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This is a big time jerk! He?s even got a smirk on his face! Haha! Appreciate your stopping to read! xoxo
Comment from patcelaw
It is good to find our soon if there is a cruel streak in the one you though loved you. Have a blessed weekend filled with joyous times.
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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It is good to find our soon if there is a cruel streak in the one you though loved you. Have a blessed weekend filled with joyous times.
Patricia
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you! And yes this guys the jerk of all time I think! Appreciate you stopped by to read! Have a blessed weekend yourself! xoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a jerk, ok I understand taking the heart was inevitable but the umbrella, what kind of gentleman is that?Jokes aside this is beautiful entry in the realm of the free verse. Thank you for sharing and have a blessed week end.
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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What a jerk, ok I understand taking the heart was inevitable but the umbrella, what kind of gentleman is that?Jokes aside this is beautiful entry in the realm of the free verse. Thank you for sharing and have a blessed week end.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Yeah, I know, Right!! And he?s even got a smirk on his face! Haha!! Thanks for your awesome feedback and stars! xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
I guess this is what is meant by cold comfort! Better late than never when it comes to facing the ugly truth. The artwork alone is worth a thousand words. Nice presentation.
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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I guess this is what is meant by cold comfort! Better late than never when it comes to facing the ugly truth. The artwork alone is worth a thousand words. Nice presentation.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Haha! Yeah a real jerk right here! LoL! Thank you very much for appreciating! xoxo
