Life With An Undertaker
A 50-word relationship.21 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
I like this one, LisaMay. Finally you are digging into the treasured vault of the forgotten. :) The weather causes the coffin and mistakes do happen. Thank you from the bottom of my stoned heart. You made me smile. :)
I like this one, LisaMay. Finally you are digging into the treasured vault of the forgotten. :) The weather causes the coffin and mistakes do happen. Thank you from the bottom of my stoned heart. You made me smile. :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - this is a good one, Lisa. The title grabbed my attention and I was wondering what you would come up with for this little ditty. You certainly didn't disappoint. I'd put this one up with one of my favorites. An entertaining read. Hugs, Lou
LOL - this is a good one, Lisa. The title grabbed my attention and I was wondering what you would come up with for this little ditty. You certainly didn't disappoint. I'd put this one up with one of my favorites. An entertaining read. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from patcelaw
I do hope you will write more of them as they are delightful. My Pastor worked in a funeral home and I think he will enjoy this one so I'm sending him the link.
Patricia
I do hope you will write more of them as they are delightful. My Pastor worked in a funeral home and I think he will enjoy this one so I'm sending him the link.
Patricia
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!!! That was hilarious! You got all the right words to use for this story and kept the main story perfect! LOL. You will have to publish them, they are too precious and too funny not too. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
LOL!!! That was hilarious! You got all the right words to use for this story and kept the main story perfect! LOL. You will have to publish them, they are too precious and too funny not too. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Wils
It cracked me up, plain and simple. Amazing how easily you can turn a serious subject matter into something humourous. Keep writing them I say.
Geoff
It cracked me up, plain and simple. Amazing how easily you can turn a serious subject matter into something humourous. Keep writing them I say.
Geoff
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
OMG! This one is chock-full of wordplay and regardless of the subject, very funny. LOL.
"dying to urn more money by organising cremations." This line is stellar.
OMG! This one is chock-full of wordplay and regardless of the subject, very funny. LOL.
"dying to urn more money by organising cremations." This line is stellar.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
A fun little 50 word story which included lots of puns as well. I have not read the previous stories you mentioned in your authors note but this one surely makes me want to read more! Keep writing and have good day :-)
A fun little 50 word story which included lots of puns as well. I have not read the previous stories you mentioned in your authors note but this one surely makes me want to read more! Keep writing and have good day :-)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from RodG
An appropriate ending to this series--life with an undertaker. You saved some of your best word plays for last. I especially like your opening and closing sentence. Rod.
An appropriate ending to this series--life with an undertaker. You saved some of your best word plays for last. I especially like your opening and closing sentence. Rod.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
What a treat! I truly enjoyed your brief story. Love, love, love the word play. What fun! Perhaps the subject matter was what drew me; my dad was an undertaker. Often heard in our house were such things as; "yours til the undertaker, undertakes to take you under" ~ "when your friends desert you, we're the last to let you down" ~ "located on the corner of Rigor and Mortis streets". His nickname was Mort the Mortician. Thanks for the fond memories. Back on point; great story.
What a treat! I truly enjoyed your brief story. Love, love, love the word play. What fun! Perhaps the subject matter was what drew me; my dad was an undertaker. Often heard in our house were such things as; "yours til the undertaker, undertakes to take you under" ~ "when your friends desert you, we're the last to let you down" ~ "located on the corner of Rigor and Mortis streets". His nickname was Mort the Mortician. Thanks for the fond memories. Back on point; great story.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
If they really are all over then perhaps it is appropriate to end with the undertaker to bury the whole series. Mind you I will be employing resurrectionists to delve into the past and exhume some of the series's delightful humour. So for the time being then P.I.P. to life with a...
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If they really are all over then perhaps it is appropriate to end with the undertaker to bury the whole series. Mind you I will be employing resurrectionists to delve into the past and exhume some of the series's delightful humour. So for the time being then P.I.P. to life with a...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020