Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! Yes, definitely have them look at the smashed up part. What would Pons do without his helpful cousin?

I've been infizzable at times. Like flat Coca Cola, with nary a bubble in me. Ever feel that way, BIll? :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

I?ve as blah as pond water.

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

funny story and funny dialogue.
You might want to add an "e" to her in Pons' first line.
Glad the driver lost out.
Your Pons and Ned posts are cute and probably fun to write.
pome lover

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks, PL

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I was afraid that Ned would become a LIEability with the funny way he talks and thinks. Seems the police quickly wash their hands off of this kind of accident. Could have ended badly but turns out okay.

Some typos:
"so now were here waiting for the highway patrol." (we're)
" that youe were " (you)

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019

Thanks, lyenochka.