A Bigfoot Carol
Christmas with Bigfoot19 total reviews
Comment from BlueTiger
This was great! I love your creativity in this piece. I never would have thought to write a Christmas Carol with Bigfoot, but your story had me smiling. My only suggestion would be to maybe add some more length to the ending paragraph, but it still works as is. I look forward to reading more of your work.
-BT
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This was great! I love your creativity in this piece. I never would have thought to write a Christmas Carol with Bigfoot, but your story had me smiling. My only suggestion would be to maybe add some more length to the ending paragraph, but it still works as is. I look forward to reading more of your work.
-BT
Comment Written 07-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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I am honored by your review. Thanks for taking time to read. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
This is wonderful, and I'd say it's marketable. I never imagined Bigfoot in "A Christmas Carol" scenario, but it works really well. The name of Tiny Tina was a tip-off to the Christmas Carol analogy. You did a great job of introducing the ghosts and showing how Bigfoot changes as a result of the visits. How nice that Tiny Tina, the owlet, was saved. Beautiful work, and really promote it, so more will have the opportunity to read it. judi
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This is wonderful, and I'd say it's marketable. I never imagined Bigfoot in "A Christmas Carol" scenario, but it works really well. The name of Tiny Tina was a tip-off to the Christmas Carol analogy. You did a great job of introducing the ghosts and showing how Bigfoot changes as a result of the visits. How nice that Tiny Tina, the owlet, was saved. Beautiful work, and really promote it, so more will have the opportunity to read it. judi
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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I am honored by your review and am glad you enjoyed my version of a Bigfoot Christmas carol. Thanks so much for your positive words. Elaine
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You're welcome. Great work. judi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello mermaids
I love your version of the Christmas Carol it makes me smile with delight of how with your
story of how the animals, show compassion to
Bigfoot and invited him to their Christmas dinner.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Hello mermaids
I love your version of the Christmas Carol it makes me smile with delight of how with your
story of how the animals, show compassion to
Bigfoot and invited him to their Christmas dinner.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Sugarray77
You have written a friendly spoof of the Dickens work.. A Christmas Carol... I think your likable Bigfoot has a lot of redeemable qualities that come to the fore at the end of the verse. Well done on a cute rendition.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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You have written a friendly spoof of the Dickens work.. A Christmas Carol... I think your likable Bigfoot has a lot of redeemable qualities that come to the fore at the end of the verse. Well done on a cute rendition.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from country ranch writer
This is different and I like it it shows compassion and giving of ones self to others a good example for others to follow.great work up for your story I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This is different and I like it it shows compassion and giving of ones self to others a good example for others to follow.great work up for your story I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Connie C
It's been a long time since I've been on FanStory, so what a surprise to see that you're writing stories as well as poetry. And what a great little story this is too, Elaine. I love how you incorporated all these animals into this Christmas Carol themed story.
You mention your struggles with sentence structure and grammar. I was an English teacher and breezed right through your story not noticing any errors! Excellent job, my friend.
Connie
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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It's been a long time since I've been on FanStory, so what a surprise to see that you're writing stories as well as poetry. And what a great little story this is too, Elaine. I love how you incorporated all these animals into this Christmas Carol themed story.
You mention your struggles with sentence structure and grammar. I was an English teacher and breezed right through your story not noticing any errors! Excellent job, my friend.
Connie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks again for your generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Sasha
This is very clever and beautifully written, I enjoyed it very much and I too, love A Christmas Carrol, I have read it many times and look forward to seeing it on television every Christmas. Lovely work with this one.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This is very clever and beautifully written, I enjoyed it very much and I too, love A Christmas Carrol, I have read it many times and look forward to seeing it on television every Christmas. Lovely work with this one.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thanks again for your generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Wabigoon
Mermaids--
I am not a big fan of A Christmas Carol. It is what happens after everything is taken from us-- then "God" can return those things He, his religion stole and people like Dickens will write books about it that make them famous. I don't think that's exactly your purpose but why not imagine something really different?
I noticed this:
and happiness a(t) he watches the gathering. "As," I presume?
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Mermaids--
I am not a big fan of A Christmas Carol. It is what happens after everything is taken from us-- then "God" can return those things He, his religion stole and people like Dickens will write books about it that make them famous. I don't think that's exactly your purpose but why not imagine something really different?
I noticed this:
and happiness a(t) he watches the gathering. "As," I presume?
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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I appreciate your taking time to read, especially since you are not a fan of the story. I have some editing to do and there are a few grammar mistakes in the story. Thanks so much for your generous amount of stars, I am honored. Elaine
Comment from Zue65
Oh my, little children will surely love and beg for this story to be read again and again by their parents or grandparents. It is a beautiful animal story with a moral lesson that today are already forgotten to be taught to little kids. Thanks for sharing this excellent write,.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Oh my, little children will surely love and beg for this story to be read again and again by their parents or grandparents. It is a beautiful animal story with a moral lesson that today are already forgotten to be taught to little kids. Thanks for sharing this excellent write,.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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I appreciate your taking time to read my Bigfoot tale. Thanks for your encouraging review. Elaine
