Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Isn't that called an eclipse or is it eclampsia ? We should be more worried about the sun giving us a 'cold shoulder' then in hell's ashes we'll smoulder. Gee, I'm so confused ! Thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest
Hugs, Trisha

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks, Trisha.

I guess for the moon to be dark, the sun would have to be dark as well! Just a gloomy thought about the end of the world...

Steve

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Oct-2018

Steve, you?re always welcome

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Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

This is a great write! A very creative take on the moon. To think of it as an eye....well it's a bit unnerving! And I loved it! You did a great job at creating an eerie setting for the reader. Your words were powerful and the presentation was great! Awesome write! Especially for only three lines!

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks, Kelly.

Yep, eerie was what I was aiming for.

Steve