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Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Scene at a Martial Arts Studio"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from bob cullen
I love Ned, not very bright but a whole load of fun. Quick on the lip and firing loaded one-liners. Is he based on someone you know. He sure reminds me of a friend of mine.
A very entertaining write. I'd like to read more
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reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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I love Ned, not very bright but a whole load of fun. Quick on the lip and firing loaded one-liners. Is he based on someone you know. He sure reminds me of a friend of mine.
A very entertaining write. I'd like to read more
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Bob
