Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Mistydawn
After reading Chapter two of you crime story
I have decided it's not Timmy (to short far as height. And now I'm very suspicious of Rachel from the part you told us about Beth and Steve.
Folks here of Fanstory should read why I'm
think she Could be the killer.
Good clue
Gert

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I hope it was worth the wait. Rachel, huh? She has been through a lot, and sometimes it doesn't take much to send someone into a psychotic break. Killers oftentimes put themselves in the investigation. So you may be right.
Thanks again for all your support, it means a lot to me, take care.

reply by Gert sherwood on 22-Feb-2018

You are welcome Misty
I like to read a crime story that intrigues me.
Smiles Gert

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi there, it's the first chapter I read so I still have to get into it. Fortunately you've only just started the story, so I should be able to catch up fairly easily.
"To make matters worse, the paramedic removed her handcuffs so they can treat her wrist."=" ... so they could treat her wrist."
I'm looking forward to reading on. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thank you for your kind review and helpful suggestion. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. To summarize the last chapter. Janet found Bill on their front room floor dead, a huge gash in his head. Everyone believes she did it, to stop his abuse. Not wanting to go to prison she ran.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, hope to see you again, take care.

reply by Ulla on 22-Feb-2018

Thanks a lot, for the update. I'll fan you so I won't miss out on the story. Ulla:)))

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

Review by Henry: This story has it the clues, some opposing. This story has the direction, heading in opposite directions. There are two suspects, one obvious through circumstances, and the other, an unknown character in the background, seeking vengeance and retribution. Dialog tags are there when appropriate.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm happy to know you liked the story enough to come back a second time. Hopefully, I can keep your interest to the end. A goal to strive for.
Thank you again for your nice review and support it means a lot to me.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

She's about to kill another deserving abuser, but one thing confused me. You called him Steve earlier, and at the end it was Bill. Typo or did I misunderstand? Beth and Steve? Beth and Bill? Which is it?

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 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your review and for catching the typo. It's Janet and Bill, Beth and Steve. My sometimers must've kicked in. It's been doing that a lot lately. Part of aging I guess, grrr.
Thanks again for all your support it means a lot to me, take care.