Slow Down
Senryu Yourself44 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
I am not surprised to see this one with the first prize rosette atteached. Well done indeed. The desire to spend it all too quickly is a problem for many. But there are some thing you just can't keep on deposit.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
I am not surprised to see this one with the first prize rosette atteached. Well done indeed. The desire to spend it all too quickly is a problem for many. But there are some thing you just can't keep on deposit.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks again for your excellent review and humor. There are things that you can't let build up no matter how hard you try. Thanks again...Bill
Comment from crzypnter
Bill
This is a very clever and funny write. I'm sure many men here will relate. Lol
Easy to see why this is the winner. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
Bill
This is a very clever and funny write. I'm sure many men here will relate. Lol
Easy to see why this is the winner. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks again, August, for your great review. I appreciate it. Personally, I'm too old to relate to it (ha). Take care, my friend...Bill
Comment from Ogden
That's unfortunate. If you want my advice, keep the money and get rid of the wife. ;-)
Nice senyru, with an appropriate satori.
Good luck in the contest.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
That's unfortunate. If you want my advice, keep the money and get rid of the wife. ;-)
Nice senyru, with an appropriate satori.
Good luck in the contest.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Don, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Thanks, it won the contest. Take care...Bill
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You're welcome, Bill. Good news!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Oh no! I'm sure some can relate to this. Have you shown this to your wife? It's always good when you can laugh at yourself. You did a great job with this and I can see why you were a winner
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
Oh no! I'm sure some can relate to this. Have you shown this to your wife? It's always good when you can laugh at yourself. You did a great job with this and I can see why you were a winner
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks again for your excellent review and kind comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...Bill
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Cedar,
Your poem is a hoot! Now I can't offer my opinion about the second half of your poem, but I do know that money doesn't last long. My mother always said that if I have a dime, I spend a quarter! Hmmm...
Love your entry. Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
Hello Cedar,
Your poem is a hoot! Now I can't offer my opinion about the second half of your poem, but I do know that money doesn't last long. My mother always said that if I have a dime, I spend a quarter! Hmmm...
Love your entry. Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Diane, for your humorous review. I'm glad you thought it was a hoot. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from Ben Colder
U 2 . I thought I was the only one who heard that line. LOL. Much like money sometimes it is wise to diversify. Money wise that is. LOL. I see no mistakes in the write.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
U 2 . I thought I was the only one who heard that line. LOL. Much like money sometimes it is wise to diversify. Money wise that is. LOL. I see no mistakes in the write.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Ben, for your funny review. I appreciate it. Have a nice day...Bill
Comment from LIJ Red
Farmer: Oh, we breed our champion bull every other day.
Visiting wife: See, hubby? Every other day is not unusual for a champion.
Farmer: Of course we have a different cow every other day.
Excellent and to prompt.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
Farmer: Oh, we breed our champion bull every other day.
Visiting wife: See, hubby? Every other day is not unusual for a champion.
Farmer: Of course we have a different cow every other day.
Excellent and to prompt.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your funny review Red, that's my kind of joke. I've lived on a farm for 73 years. Take care...Bill
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, clever and humorous, an unbeatable combination - more true than not, a typical human experience, reminding us most endearingly of our vulnerability as participant and critic...
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
In my opinion, clever and humorous, an unbeatable combination - more true than not, a typical human experience, reminding us most endearingly of our vulnerability as participant and critic...
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
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You are very welcome indeed, Bill...Eve
Comment from jdrhye
Funny....the font is difficult to read but the photo with it is great! Enjoyed the short read keep me coming! Pretty much self explanatory not much left to say except what did she buy?
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
Funny....the font is difficult to read but the photo with it is great! Enjoyed the short read keep me coming! Pretty much self explanatory not much left to say except what did she buy?
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great evening...Bill
Comment from Ashlie Daza
It is quite fun to read. It's very funny. Gave me a good laugh. With only a few words and syllables, your poem did just that. Well deserved win. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
It is quite fun to read. It's very funny. Gave me a good laugh. With only a few words and syllables, your poem did just that. Well deserved win. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Ashlie, for your excellent review. I'm glad it made you laugh. Take care my friend...Bill
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You are most welcome Bill. Take care
As well.