So...so the Lights are Low
oh that feeling48 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Good presentation for your love poem. I liked the way you wrote this, as if you were speaking to your lover. I kinda got the feeling it was spiritual as well. Great writing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Good presentation for your love poem. I liked the way you wrote this, as if you were speaking to your lover. I kinda got the feeling it was spiritual as well. Great writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the romantic vibe of your poem. The flow and content is very nice. The artwork compliments your poem and is spot on. Very well written and well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I like the romantic vibe of your poem. The flow and content is very nice. The artwork compliments your poem and is spot on. Very well written and well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Your poem reads like a song lyric. I can hear or feel the beat. It is an avant garde type of poem (forgive my mis-spelling). I like it. It would be welcome in a poetry house such as the one I went to once in North Beach, San Francisco.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Your poem reads like a song lyric. I can hear or feel the beat. It is an avant garde type of poem (forgive my mis-spelling). I like it. It would be welcome in a poetry house such as the one I went to once in North Beach, San Francisco.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you sincerely.
Comment from Cedar
This one has the lyrics of a romantic song and your presentation picture really adds to it.
Your last stanza says it all and completes your poem the way it should be...Bill
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This one has the lyrics of a romantic song and your presentation picture really adds to it.
Your last stanza says it all and completes your poem the way it should be...Bill
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Bill, U summed it up quickly but oh so accurate. Thank you.
Comment from Joel Deniz Nazario
I love the musical quality and the lyrical style. I imagine it being performed by a cool customer or easily put to some sultry tune. I imagine in such case that the final line and the pause between should arouse some raucous reaction. I enjoyed this bluesy, down and dirty feel of this very much.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I love the musical quality and the lyrical style. I imagine it being performed by a cool customer or easily put to some sultry tune. I imagine in such case that the final line and the pause between should arouse some raucous reaction. I enjoyed this bluesy, down and dirty feel of this very much.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed your review very much too.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture with the swans in the lake and the lights down low. It gives the poem more power and I like the way both poem and picture fit together so well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I like the picture with the swans in the lake and the lights down low. It gives the poem more power and I like the way both poem and picture fit together so well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Zue65
Ah the feeling of loving and being loved, is exquisitely captured in your poem. The picture and the background color complements well the message of your poem. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem with us. All the best.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Ah the feeling of loving and being loved, is exquisitely captured in your poem. The picture and the background color complements well the message of your poem. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem with us. All the best.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your well-written poem. I found the rhyming scheme pleasant and I enjoyed how each stanza flowed into the next.
~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your well-written poem. I found the rhyming scheme pleasant and I enjoyed how each stanza flowed into the next.
~patty~
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Smile. And I thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
This sees a poem of mourning and remembrance of the person in the locket. It tells how the speaker feels the presence of the person in the locket. The repetition and vernacular makes it almost sound like a rap song.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This sees a poem of mourning and remembrance of the person in the locket. It tells how the speaker feels the presence of the person in the locket. The repetition and vernacular makes it almost sound like a rap song.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hey there, Doug. I've missed ya. This is a lovely romantic and sweet poem.
Nicely done it flowed well. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hey there, Doug. I've missed ya. This is a lovely romantic and sweet poem.
Nicely done it flowed well. ~Kerry
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Kerry.
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Welcome:))
