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Dark Might VS Sharp Light

Darkness fails facing dazzling light.

43 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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Welcome back RP, I haven't seen you post one fo yonks, my friend. What an excellent entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, these are difficult to negotiate meaniingfully, but, by gad, I think you've done it! Well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Roy,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting words, and also for Good Luck Wishes and Blessings.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
reply by royowen on 05-Dec-2017
    Well done RP
Comment from Leineco
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Your 2-4-2 poem succinctly sums up the essence of
political malfeasance -

when the light of truth burns away veils, even the most
powerful of dictators/manipulators cannot hide behind
the darkened curtain obscuring reality...

nicely done!


 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Leineco,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-4-2, Dark Light vs Sharp Light, has the proper syllable count and looks on to the day that Hell is conquered and the Heavens will come down to the earth.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Bill Schott,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
Comment from robina1978
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A lovely artwork that complements your poem perfectly. You used dark versus light in this 2-4-2 poem. You will make a good chance in this contest. Best wishes for it.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Robina,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words, and also for Best Wishes.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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This is a well penned short poem. A thousand words could not have made this message any clearer. The picture you chose is a complement to the message. Well done.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Brigitte,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
reply by Brigitte Elko on 04-Dec-2017
    My pleasure to read.
    Brigitte
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;
This presentation and lovely words display the win of light over dark, and good over evil. I think many of us harbor the delight in any story when this happens,

~patty~

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Patty,
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about pride and truth, upon eternal rule or unwritten law of Nature, vein power has to surrender before truth and true light; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello DR ALCREATOR,
    After such a long time, but as usual in the same majestic way!
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    I'm glad to know that you liked it.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
Comment from visionary1234
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Oh I DO like this one RP! I'm less than fond of these short forms but I know how difficult it is to write one with some 'meat' to it. Perhaps I'm also sensitized by American politics at the moment ... I await the 'sharp light', believe me! Well done!
:)Sharyn

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Sharyn,
    After such a long time, but as usual in a very beautiful and remarkable style!
    I'm really grateful to you for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
reply by visionary1234 on 06-Dec-2017
    my great pleasure! :)S
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Amazing this photo of ancient times. Looks like the underling slew a creature larger and more powerful than himself. "Dark light bows at last to sharp light" seems like less powerful meek creature got best out of larger creature. truly, liberty justice

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hello Liberty Justice,
    "Dark might..."
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
reply by Liberty Justice on 04-Dec-2017
    You're welcome, dear poet, for comprehensive review and stars and wishing me GOOD LUCK in contest, Today!
Comment from l.raven
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HI RP, I am so glad I caught this...and the Lord said ...let there be light...and there was light...this can be taken in a couple ways...that good over takes bad...and light shines over dark...I am so glad to see you my sweet friend...so very well written...and the perfect picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Hi L. Raven,
    After such a long time, but as usual in a very pleasant way!
    Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Shiny SIX STARS.
    Highly grateful to you for the same.
    Have a pleasant time!
    ~ RP
reply by l.raven on 05-Dec-2017
    your soooo welcome RP...I love reading your writes my sweet friend...you have a wonderful evening...love Linda xxoo