Just a Bad Day
3-5-3 form67 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fun poem that made me laugh with its Norman Rockwellian humor of an officer ticketing a kid in a toy car. There is a nostalgia and charm to this. This is also an ekphrastic poem because it only works with the photo and cannot stand alone. I enjoyed it because it made me reminisce about how we imagine the past and the present.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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This is a fun poem that made me laugh with its Norman Rockwellian humor of an officer ticketing a kid in a toy car. There is a nostalgia and charm to this. This is also an ekphrastic poem because it only works with the photo and cannot stand alone. I enjoyed it because it made me reminisce about how we imagine the past and the present.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Andre, I love the picture...reminded me of the Silverado truck...same small size my grandson had...my son put these big flood lights on it...you could see it a mile down the road...LOL...thank you for a great review my friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five Stars for you dear poet. This photo and your amazing words are so stunning and amusing. Such a cute way to emphasize a child speeding, or perhaps you were making a point. WELL DONE. So cute. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Five Stars for you dear poet. This photo and your amazing words are so stunning and amusing. Such a cute way to emphasize a child speeding, or perhaps you were making a point. WELL DONE. So cute. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Liberty, I just love the picture sweet girl...I thought...either his father is the policeman...or he is learning a good lesson now...LOL...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about a bad lad on road stopped by the traffic cops asking for the car licence and pulling over on charge of boy's speeding the toy car on a public main road; I liked. (6-STAR)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This speaks about a bad lad on road stopped by the traffic cops asking for the car licence and pulling over on charge of boy's speeding the toy car on a public main road; I liked. (6-STAR)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI My sweet friend, I was thinking maybe his father(policeman)...LOL...but if not ...he just learned a good lesson...be safe on the road...thank you sooooooo very much for your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...I love the picture...I just went to see if you posted...and see you are going to have a Birthday soon...Happy Birthday if I miss it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from rjuselius
I know these days when you are better to just stay in bed and curl up in your blanket. Nicely done.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze !
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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I know these days when you are better to just stay in bed and curl up in your blanket. Nicely done.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze !
Rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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HI Rebekka, you are so right...and there are those days I do just that...sigh...thank you for a great review sweet girl...and Blessings and a big squeeze back at ya girlfriend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Kerry Foley
lol, This is a truly cute 3-5-3 poem, my friend, lol Great picture to suit your words.
Good luck to you! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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lol, This is a truly cute 3-5-3 poem, my friend, lol Great picture to suit your words.
Good luck to you! ~Kerry
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI Kerry, I am so glad you like it...I love the picture...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
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Your welcome:)
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful story you have written for this artwork it would be interesting to know what had happened and the outcome very well done and keep having fun****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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What a wonderful story you have written for this artwork it would be interesting to know what had happened and the outcome very well done and keep having fun****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI Kahpot, LOL...I would bet he didn't get a ticket...LOL...thank you for a great review my friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! G'day again, mate.
Poor little guy. I hope he wasn't drunk as well lol.
Hey, these are getting smaller and smaller... that doesn't make them any easier to write though. I'm a writer and not a mathematician and these syllable counting jobs are way too hard for this old bugger.
Great work again.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Hahahaha! G'day again, mate.
Poor little guy. I hope he wasn't drunk as well lol.
Hey, these are getting smaller and smaller... that doesn't make them any easier to write though. I'm a writer and not a mathematician and these syllable counting jobs are way too hard for this old bugger.
Great work again.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI Fez, LOL...I was thinking maybe the policeman was the father...but maybe not...I had another picture...but I want to write a long poem on it...thank you for a great review Fez...and as always Kunusta to Delia as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from mermaids
This is a fun poem. I like the pic, it makes the poem more humorous. The 3-5-3 form is a challenge but you created a poem that many area able to relate to. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This is a fun poem. I like the pic, it makes the poem more humorous. The 3-5-3 form is a challenge but you created a poem that many area able to relate to. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI Elaine, LOL...I love the picture...made me laugh...thank you my sweet friend for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
The words are everyday and infuriating, but the artwork makes this funny indeed.
Of course, when it was a ten-year-old doing eighty in a Camry-not as cute.
Excellent three five three.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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The words are everyday and infuriating, but the artwork makes this funny indeed.
Of course, when it was a ten-year-old doing eighty in a Camry-not as cute.
Excellent three five three.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI LIJ, OMG ...no that isn't so cute sweet girl...I love the picture...made me laugh...thank you once again for a great review my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from RGstar
A picture paints a thousand words, and this one perhaps only a few beautiful ones.
Simplicity at its best.
Bravo.
My best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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A picture paints a thousand words, and this one perhaps only a few beautiful ones.
Simplicity at its best.
Bravo.
My best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Hi Roy, thank you my sweet friend,,,i love this picture...my Grandson got a Silverado truck in this same size...and my son put flood lights on the hood...you could see him coming miles down the road...LOL...thank you for a great review...and best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo