Mooning
A little lunacy41 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!!! Tony, that was so funny! My goodness, I never saw that poem coming from that lovely picture, but with the presentation, you really did a fun job with this one! I couldn't help but laugh! :)) xx Sandra x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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LOL!!! Tony, that was so funny! My goodness, I never saw that poem coming from that lovely picture, but with the presentation, you really did a fun job with this one! I couldn't help but laugh! :)) xx Sandra x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Sandra. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Lucian Carter
A language warning doesn't really seem necessary :)
Fun little poem with great formatting. Is that where the term mooning comes from. We always think of the moon as having a face, but maybe it's been showing Earth its ass since before humans even walked the surface. Certainly an amusing thought and worth a whimsical poem about.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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A language warning doesn't really seem necessary :)
Fun little poem with great formatting. Is that where the term mooning comes from. We always think of the moon as having a face, but maybe it's been showing Earth its ass since before humans even walked the surface. Certainly an amusing thought and worth a whimsical poem about.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Lucian. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from country ranch writer
Sounds like you muse has a thing bottoms up there on the moon. Guess it happens to the best of muses burining the candle at both ends humm the news said the harvest moon was going to be coming in late this year hummm
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Sounds like you muse has a thing bottoms up there on the moon. Guess it happens to the best of muses burining the candle at both ends humm the news said the harvest moon was going to be coming in late this year hummm
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, CRW. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
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Comment from RGstar
And why not the humour, Tony. Not taken personally. Brought a smile to my face...such is needed to show the diversity and personality.
My best wishes. I smiled right through it.
Have a great day.
RG
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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And why not the humour, Tony. Not taken personally. Brought a smile to my face...such is needed to show the diversity and personality.
My best wishes. I smiled right through it.
Have a great day.
RG
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, RG. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well I did not expect that last line! You surprised me there and made me laugh! A fun write from your camp which gave me a good laugh, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Well I did not expect that last line! You surprised me there and made me laugh! A fun write from your camp which gave me a good laugh, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Dolly. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This was a very cute poem you penned on the moon. I don't really think you need the language warning though. Nicely done. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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This was a very cute poem you penned on the moon. I don't really think you need the language warning though. Nicely done. ~Kerry
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Kerry. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from estory
A nice humorous touch to this unique little poem, with a bit of tongue in cheek social commentary on the people who think they're a cut above anyone else. The sun shines out my arse. perfect image for it lol estory
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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A nice humorous touch to this unique little poem, with a bit of tongue in cheek social commentary on the people who think they're a cut above anyone else. The sun shines out my arse. perfect image for it lol estory
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, estory. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from sandy montgomery
Well not your best work. This was fun though and made me laugh. I think it's reminiscent of a limerick. I liked the presentation. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Well not your best work. This was fun though and made me laugh. I think it's reminiscent of a limerick. I liked the presentation. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Sandy. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how pride is the moon musing her identifying herself belongs to be a better class, as she has her own light to burn but most days the sun offers light to shade her; I liked.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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This speaks how pride is the moon musing her identifying herself belongs to be a better class, as she has her own light to burn but most days the sun offers light to shade her; I liked.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Alcreator. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Bucketlist
WELL, Tony !!! you surprised me with this one.. I am past the age of prim disgust, and have moved into "let 're rip" . Life's too short not to laugh, and your title is falsely exciting. But I got through it in record time of 1 hour, so it must have been interesting,..I guess you are the crescent man. Good to read a different view of you,.BUTT you "crack me up"
Trisha
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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WELL, Tony !!! you surprised me with this one.. I am past the age of prim disgust, and have moved into "let 're rip" . Life's too short not to laugh, and your title is falsely exciting. But I got through it in record time of 1 hour, so it must have been interesting,..I guess you are the crescent man. Good to read a different view of you,.BUTT you "crack me up"
Trisha
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Hi, Trisha. Many thanks for taking the time to review this vulgar little poem! Much appreciated, especially your riposte! Tony
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You're very welcome!
