Hora Haiku: A Gothic Tale of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "haiku (Luna's allure)"by Gypsy Blue Rose and Dean Kuch
45 total reviews
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello dear friend! I love this 5-7-5. It is really cool what you did with the picture. Flows good with great content. I learned a new word, and very interesting. lycanthropic....thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
Hello dear friend! I love this 5-7-5. It is really cool what you did with the picture. Flows good with great content. I learned a new word, and very interesting. lycanthropic....thanks for sharing
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting, lalajovanoski.
Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself sincerely appreciate it.
Have a lovely weekend.
Comment from DALLAS01
This poem is indeed an experience. Loved everything about it. Appreciated the notes. Didn't have to leave my ballgame to find the dictionary to verify the word. This is a unique project the two of you have initiated. Best of luck. Really outside the box.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
This poem is indeed an experience. Loved everything about it. Appreciated the notes. Didn't have to leave my ballgame to find the dictionary to verify the word. This is a unique project the two of you have initiated. Best of luck. Really outside the box.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Dallas, and for that shiny sixth star as well.
Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself sincerely appreciate it.
I hope you have a lovely weekend.
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Heading t a writers conference in Ripley WV. :-))
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Have a great time and stay safe!
~Dean :)
Comment from Mark Schardine
Werewolves frighten us, and as soon as a wolf howls at a full moon, we suspect someone is pursuing us. Maybe it is our imaginations, or maybe a real danger.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
Werewolves frighten us, and as soon as a wolf howls at a full moon, we suspect someone is pursuing us. Maybe it is our imaginations, or maybe a real danger.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Or both, Mark.
Thank you for taking a shot at this.
Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself certainly appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Bis zum nächsten Mal...
~Dean
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have enjoyed this continuing saga done is beautiful poetry. I do have to add that wolves howling in the middle of a snowy night is down right scary. I have heard it and have seen them.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
I have enjoyed this continuing saga done is beautiful poetry. I do have to add that wolves howling in the middle of a snowy night is down right scary. I have heard it and have seen them.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Oh, me too, Barbara.
I agree, wolves are beautiful but deadly creatures.
Thanks.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Dean, what an amazinly powerful Haiku. I just love your stroyline that it goes to. The illustration is so intensely cool. Pretty wild, in a literal sense. lol. Love it.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
Dean, what an amazinly powerful Haiku. I just love your stroyline that it goes to. The illustration is so intensely cool. Pretty wild, in a literal sense. lol. Love it.
~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much, Kerry, I am really glad you enjoyed this!
Thanks for the awesome comments and the six stars too.
I deeply appreciate it.
Horror Haiku Hugs, comin' your way...
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lol, I love your emoji responses. heh-heh
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Heh-heh-heh...
Comment from Bill Schott
I love the concept of the haiku story line and I am digging this high test artsy wolfen pictoid. I must note the alliteration as well. This sounds like a horror story, Dean. Is this something you're comfortable with?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
I love the concept of the haiku story line and I am digging this high test artsy wolfen pictoid. I must note the alliteration as well. This sounds like a horror story, Dean. Is this something you're comfortable with?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Uhhhh, I think I'll be okay with the story line, Bill, LOL.
Thanks for reading, much obliged.
~Dean
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is well written good strong word choices used and as usual the presentation is very good loved the picture I enjoyed my friend well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
Oh yes my friend this is well written good strong word choices used and as usual the presentation is very good loved the picture I enjoyed my friend well done regards Jill
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thanks very much for reading, Jill.
Both Gypsy Blue Rose and I appreciate you following along.
Blessings,
~Dean :}
Comment from Treischel
Definitely a unique and exciting project. It certainly is up your genre's alley. Here we have the pull of the moon and its effect on lycanthropic man and beast, neatly expressed in a haiku. I hear the howls.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
Definitely a unique and exciting project. It certainly is up your genre's alley. Here we have the pull of the moon and its effect on lycanthropic man and beast, neatly expressed in a haiku. I hear the howls.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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I'm glad you were able to hear those howls, Tom.
I'm also glad that you took the time to weigh in on this haiku.
Much obliged, my friend.
~Dean
Comment from MizKat
Hi Dean,
Again you have written a very nice poem. I have enjoyed reading it too.
Keep writing your wonderful poems and I'll keep on reading them.
Kat
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
Hi Dean,
Again you have written a very nice poem. I have enjoyed reading it too.
Keep writing your wonderful poems and I'll keep on reading them.
Kat
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thanks.
Comment from Annie_ Stone
That is a very interesting chapter for your book. The image it's self was very cool, I have never seen one like that before. I shall look into others you two have done, when I can. Thanks Annie
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
That is a very interesting chapter for your book. The image it's self was very cool, I have never seen one like that before. I shall look into others you two have done, when I can. Thanks Annie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for reading, Annie. I am glad you enjoyed this.
I appreciate your thoughtful comments as well as the sixth shiny star.
Warmest wishes.
~Dean :)