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Hora Haiku: A Gothic Tale of Terror

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "haiku (Luna's allure)"
by Gypsy Blue Rose and Dean Kuch

45 total reviews 
Comment from lalajovanoski
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Hello dear friend! I love this 5-7-5. It is really cool what you did with the picture. Flows good with great content. I learned a new word, and very interesting. lycanthropic....thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thanks for reading and commenting, lalajovanoski.
    Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself sincerely appreciate it.
    Have a lovely weekend.
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Comment from DALLAS01
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This poem is indeed an experience. Loved everything about it. Appreciated the notes. Didn't have to leave my ballgame to find the dictionary to verify the word. This is a unique project the two of you have initiated. Best of luck. Really outside the box.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Thanks for reading and commenting, Dallas, and for that shiny sixth star as well.
    Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself sincerely appreciate it.
    I hope you have a lovely weekend.
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reply by DALLAS01 on 09-Jun-2017
    Heading t a writers conference in Ripley WV. :-))
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
    Have a great time and stay safe!
    ~Dean :)
Comment from Mark Schardine
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Werewolves frighten us, and as soon as a wolf howls at a full moon, we suspect someone is pursuing us. Maybe it is our imaginations, or maybe a real danger.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Or both, Mark.
    Thank you for taking a shot at this.
    Both Gypsy Blue Rose and myself certainly appreciate your time as well as your comments.
    Bis zum nächsten Mal...
    ~Dean
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have enjoyed this continuing saga done is beautiful poetry. I do have to add that wolves howling in the middle of a snowy night is down right scary. I have heard it and have seen them.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Oh, me too, Barbara.
    I agree, wolves are beautiful but deadly creatures.
    Thanks.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Dean, what an amazinly powerful Haiku. I just love your stroyline that it goes to. The illustration is so intensely cool. Pretty wild, in a literal sense. lol. Love it.
~Kerry

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Thanks so much, Kerry, I am really glad you enjoyed this!
    Thanks for the awesome comments and the six stars too.
    I deeply appreciate it.
    Horror Haiku Hugs, comin' your way...
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reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 08-Jun-2017
    lol, I love your emoji responses. heh-heh
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Heh-heh-heh...  photo rock1_zpsbjawe7dw.gif
Comment from Bill Schott
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I love the concept of the haiku story line and I am digging this high test artsy wolfen pictoid. I must note the alliteration as well. This sounds like a horror story, Dean. Is this something you're comfortable with?

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Uhhhh, I think I'll be okay with the story line, Bill, LOL.
    Thanks for reading, much obliged.
    ~Dean
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh yes my friend this is well written good strong word choices used and as usual the presentation is very good loved the picture I enjoyed my friend well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Thanks very much for reading, Jill.
    Both Gypsy Blue Rose and I appreciate you following along.
    Blessings,
    ~Dean :}
Comment from Treischel
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Definitely a unique and exciting project. It certainly is up your genre's alley. Here we have the pull of the moon and its effect on lycanthropic man and beast, neatly expressed in a haiku. I hear the howls.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    I'm glad you were able to hear those howls, Tom.
    I'm also glad that you took the time to weigh in on this haiku.
    Much obliged, my friend.
    ~Dean
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Dean,

Again you have written a very nice poem. I have enjoyed reading it too.
Keep writing your wonderful poems and I'll keep on reading them.

Kat

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Thanks.
Comment from Annie_ Stone
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That is a very interesting chapter for your book. The image it's self was very cool, I have never seen one like that before. I shall look into others you two have done, when I can. Thanks Annie

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much for reading, Annie. I am glad you enjoyed this.
    I appreciate your thoughtful comments as well as the sixth shiny star.
    Warmest wishes.
    ~Dean :)