Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Minneapolis Adventure - Part I"...musings on us
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
I can imagine how scared you felt at the airport, having your son not be there to meet you. I do hope your visit went well and the Greg is doing better.
Good luck with your son. You do a good job writing.
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
Hello my friend,
I can imagine how scared you felt at the airport, having your son not be there to meet you. I do hope your visit went well and the Greg is doing better.
Good luck with your son. You do a good job writing.
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Hi Gypsy; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. The trip didn't get off to the greatest start, but we did manage to accomplish a great deal while I was there,
~patty~
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Oh my goodness. I could not wait to hear about this trip. I was a little disappointed that your arrival to the airport was a let down but your Author notes have given me hope. I am looking forward to part two about this trip.
You are such an excellent writer. Gurrrrrlllll, I felt every emotion and felling that you felt as you explained it. I always had flashbacks of the same disappointment and heartbreaks that my son used to put me through was truly hoping that it was not what I was thinking it was because I had similar experiences with my son when he was here.
Okay, I'm clicking over now to part two...
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Oh my goodness. I could not wait to hear about this trip. I was a little disappointed that your arrival to the airport was a let down but your Author notes have given me hope. I am looking forward to part two about this trip.
You are such an excellent writer. Gurrrrrlllll, I felt every emotion and felling that you felt as you explained it. I always had flashbacks of the same disappointment and heartbreaks that my son used to put me through was truly hoping that it was not what I was thinking it was because I had similar experiences with my son when he was here.
Okay, I'm clicking over now to part two...
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Tier; thank you SO much for your willingness to follow this story. I think the support of FanStorians like you helped to get me through last week. I could feel the prayers lifting me up.
I hope you aren't too disappointed in how things turned out,
~patty~
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Patty,
You did a great job with your story. It flows well & there is important details included.
I thought the part where you grabbed your window seat was funny. Now they assign you a seat, right?
I see that part 2 is up so I will go to it after this one.
You ended at a good point that makes readers want to read the next part.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Patty,
You did a great job with your story. It flows well & there is important details included.
I thought the part where you grabbed your window seat was funny. Now they assign you a seat, right?
I see that part 2 is up so I will go to it after this one.
You ended at a good point that makes readers want to read the next part.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Jan; I fly Southwest - so there is NO assigned seating. You get on in order of your checking in - I usually do the Early Bird, and I get onboard in the first group.
Thank you for your willingness to read along - I appreciate you and the FanStorians who supported me in this endeavor,
~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I'm relieved that Greg was okay. I feared an auto accident. Hopefully, you found him off drugs and doing well. I'll look forward to part two tomorrow. :)
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
I'm relieved that Greg was okay. I feared an auto accident. Hopefully, you found him off drugs and doing well. I'll look forward to part two tomorrow. :)
Comment Written 16-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Phyllis; thank you for reading along. I'm afraid that it wasn't quite as rosy as all that, but it was a good visit,
~patty~
Comment from MelB
Hi Patty, oh, this is a rough start. I'm glad to read things got better in your notes. I hope there is really good news to report. My fingers are crossed!
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Hi Patty, oh, this is a rough start. I'm glad to read things got better in your notes. I hope there is really good news to report. My fingers are crossed!
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Mel; thank you for reading along. My news will appear in Part II - though it may not be exactly as we all hoped,
~patty~
Comment from pbomar1115
When you were excited to meet your son after years, the bad came flooding into your mind. I hate those moments. But you calmed down feeling defeated. After awhile, he called saying he fell asleep. Taking a load of worry away. Nice story.
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
When you were excited to meet your son after years, the bad came flooding into your mind. I hate those moments. But you calmed down feeling defeated. After awhile, he called saying he fell asleep. Taking a load of worry away. Nice story.
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Your understanding of the situation made me happy - it was a very tense day,
~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
Welcome home, Patti! I'm glad it got better, and I can't wait to read it.
I skipped everyone's writings--but I stopped at yours. Yours are written in a way that my tired, sick, body doesn't seem to mind reading right now. :)
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Welcome home, Patti! I'm glad it got better, and I can't wait to read it.
I skipped everyone's writings--but I stopped at yours. Yours are written in a way that my tired, sick, body doesn't seem to mind reading right now. :)
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Rasmine; are you sick? I'm so sorry - you are in my prayers and thoughts. Thank you for following along AND for the wonderful compliment,
~patty~
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It's a bunch of things. But I hope I'm getting better!
Thank you, for asking. :)
Comment from Teri7
Patty, This is a very well written first part of your news to us all. I am so glad all went well for you and your son and that you are back home safe and sound. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Patty, This is a very well written first part of your news to us all. I am so glad all went well for you and your son and that you are back home safe and sound. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Teri; thank you so much for your willingness to follow along. The news in Part II isn't all rosy, but I am doing better with things,
~patty~
THANK YOU for the exceptional rating
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You know we have been waiting to hear from you on this trip. I am glad you are safe and not laying out there with a bashed in head. Yo see I watch a lot of movies.lol
Very well written
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
You know we have been waiting to hear from you on this trip. I am glad you are safe and not laying out there with a bashed in head. Yo see I watch a lot of movies.lol
Very well written
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Barb; thank you for reading along and for your concern. I watch a lot of movies, too - and believe me, I was fearful that could have been the case, but I was very careful!
~patty~
Comment from doggymad
Oh Patty, I am so glad that things are looking positive despite the shaky start.
It must be a difficult time for Gregory too but I am hopeful that now the first tentative steps have been taken, you will move forward, albeit it in baby steps
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Oh Patty, I am so glad that things are looking positive despite the shaky start.
It must be a difficult time for Gregory too but I am hopeful that now the first tentative steps have been taken, you will move forward, albeit it in baby steps
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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Hi Freda;
thank you so much for your continuing support in this situation. I appreciate your kind thoughts - I'm okay and safe at home,
~patty~