Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

Poem about a pair of wild pets. The artwork works well with this piece. Have to try this form sometime. The repetition and rhyme work together to reinforce ideas.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this piece. This poetic form was fun to write. You should try it sometime. It was like a word puzzle. Your warm words of encouragement are appreciated,
~patty~

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Humour with pleasing enchanting conveyances structuring its course. This write made me grin, finding its statements captivating and welcomed to my senses. Good read.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a challenge to get everything to work in the Monchielle form, but that was part of the fun in writing it,
~patty~

Comment from I.am.Kim

Excellent

Such a cute poem, I really like it. I don't have dogs, but I have a cat and some of the description applies to her. It's very well written and portrays the love you have for your dogs to the reader. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi again; thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Sometimes I think my dogs might be cats in doggy costumes. They quite often are more catlike than doggish,
~patty~

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

What a cute little story how mischievious your little guys are it is a good thing they don't eat shoes this was well written it was a pleasure I enjoyed this piece thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. I had a good time writing this one,
~patty~

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

God spelled backward is dog. Dogs are a great friend to mankind in general. They do amazing things and give of themselves freely without compunction. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art. It was well-written and flowed smoothly... John

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi John; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this Monchielle about my dogs. It was a fun write and I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from SeanFox16

Excellent

This poem got me right from the start. What is there not o love about cute little puppies? Except of course when they chew on your new pair of shoes or the back of the brand new sofa or they poop in the back of the car...lol. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. I have such a great time writing about my dogs and their inspiration helps me tackle new poetic forms. I'm glad you liked the poem,
~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Such a lovely and heartwarming poem, or should I say Monchielle. I have never heard of one until now, bit of a mouthful. The boys look lovely too, even though a bit of a trim is needed haha.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi Chloe; this poetic form was so much fun - once I got into it. I'm glad you liked the poem and picture. The boys have a grooming appointment this week. They will look so much better!
~patty~

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Oy.

I had about ten doggie messes in a row last night. An overeating dog's vomit messes....She's better now, but I was scrambling for the ten minutes it took to empty her stomach.

Sweet poem, love the pics. These are beautiful pups.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi Marla - sorry to hear about you and your dog's difficult night. I'm glad she's feeling better now, and I bet you are, too. I appreciate you stopping by to read this poem. It was fun to write,
~patty~

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

How much sadder life would be for so many of us without our canine friends. There are two in our house, and they've owned us for about 12 years now. Good rhyme, good meter, and a topic that's hard to beat. Nicely done, thanks for sharing. Craig

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi Craig; thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. I'm glad you enjoyed this Bernie and Howie tail.
~patty~

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

I enjoyed the poem. Such a cute subject and the photo matches it perfectly. I recently saw the movie, A Dog's Purpose and this poem reminded me of the movie. Love your closing line. Perfect ending.
I have nothing to suggest for corrections. It's great.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi; I haven't seen the movie. I honestly thought it would be too sad. I just may watch it when HBO picks it up. Thank you for your thoughtful review,
~patty~