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Anger and Rattlesnakes

A bit of wisdom (free verse)

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Comment from MelB
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I wrote a poem about this same thing. Anger and unforgiveness are the number one way the devil gets into our lives. It also makes you pretty darn unhappy. Good example with the picture!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Melissa.
Comment from mbroyles2
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A great comparison to drive your message home. A clear point is made about holding on to anger with an image that is easy to relate to.
Excellent job!
Michael

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, Michael.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This free verse, Anger and Rattlesnakes, has a great object lesson which should well remain in print and not acted out. You could be cautious and carry a garter snake.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017


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    Thanks for the nice review, Bill.
Comment from winnona
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a well-written poem with a very good message. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.

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    Thanks for the nice review, Winnona.
Comment from William Ross
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So true Pat we must not hold onto anger it only makes us bitter,nice job on the poem and the message. thanks for the share and have a great day

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 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thanks for the nice review, William.