Comment from nomi338

Excellent

It is an amazing event to be informed and encouraged by a dream. The opposite is to be frightened by a nightmare. They both occur at night while you are asleep.The one dream you keep and hold on to it dear, the other you try to reject for who holds on to fear.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Lunas, I really like this very much as I too feel that my dreams are a gift to help me in times of stress and trials. May your new year be blessed. Patricia

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Luna,

I have read several of your poems, and this is not a favorite - but then I am more a fan on concrete things. *smile* But I do like the idea of going to sleep and waking up a better, wiser person. hahahaha! You are welcome to give me heaping helpings of THAT! hahahahaha! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Hi robyn, this Poem was inspire
by a Celtic medieval song, and I frequent renaissance faires constantly.

I'll try to keep what you said in mind though as I'm writing going forward.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Luna I remember your wonderful poems that you wrote and posted on famstory. I enjoyed each one.


To me your fantasy dream (Moondream)_
brings images
of magical things

Gert

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Hi gert, geez I remember you as well. How have you been?

Thanks for reintroducing yourself and for th complimentary review. I'm going to fan you!

reply by Gert sherwood on 27-Dec-2016

Hi Luna
I haven't been posting on Fanstory. I have been busy getting 6 poetry books edited.

My health is trying to slide downhill, but my doctors are working on my health issues
back to normal so I can start climbing up tthe hill again.

Gert

Comment from JACK2

Good

I liked the story and the verses but I thought that the title of the poem did not show through .I also thought there could of been a rhyme or two to keep the flow going between the verses. coop

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Cool I appreciate your candid review. Sorry the poem didn't stand up for root. Maybe next time!

reply by JACK2 on 27-Dec-2016

nothing to be sorry about friend it about being honest so we can all grow and mature I enjoyed your poem.coop

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

I love it when you revisit and rework old poems. You see them in a different light a new interpretation from your original muse. Great image to be inspired by or did you write the words then find the image?

dip

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thanks, dip. Most of my published stuff in at least 16 or more years óls so it's like I'm writing anew.

A also, i wrote the words first!


Love, jeni

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is a dream like feel and flow to your words. You take the reader to another place. I like the image of riding on the unicorn and meeting fairies. I also like how the sun and moon are live characters in your words. Excellent free verse form.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Thanks

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

When I was 11, I had a pair of binoculars and looked up to the moon, and the moon wasn't just bigger, it was better. There were mountains and valleys and craters and shadows. And it came alive. Thanks for this moon poem.
Bill

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

That's so cool Bill. I'm a cancer and that explain my fascination to the moon


Me, however, always waited for the constellation Orion to appear and we would converse literally every night i would bore people, before climate change, in the frigid December, January and February nights making them look úp into the sky until they could see my hunter friend.

Thanks for sharing your person stuff with me, Bill.

Love, jeni

Comment from robina1978

Exceptional

Nice photo that complements your poem perfectly. I think at Christmas time you miss your son most. In your dream castle you found several things. You went through several doors, then in the end woke up in your own bed. It is a beautiful free verse.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Robina, what s simply heartwarming review. I thank you for your reference to my kid. It meant alot.

Last, but certainly not least, the six star review means more to me than you could imagine.

Love, jeni

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The magic of dreams -- anything can happen in a dream, and here it does and a series of magical door open onto a series of visions that cause changes to take place in the sleeper who awakens with with a deeper understanding of the mysteries of life gained in the dream.

A whimsical piece of free verse with occasional bursts of rhyme. Other devices include imagery which runs through the whole and occasional alliteration.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2016

Dear Jim, thank you for your insightful and find review. You csn imagine how much it means to me.
Love, jeni