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Things I love to write for and about the Lord

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Comment from w.j.debi
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The great thing is that the Lord knows the hearts of all his children, the journey they need to take and He is patient and loving enough to let us find the way. Keep the faith and prayers alive and miracles do happen. Sometime they take longer than we want.

Your writing is good. We all get better with practice. Hat you put your heart into your writing lets the reader make a connection and that is one of the main battles. Your use of dialog is excellent. Keep the stories coming.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
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Teri, what a wonderful blessing as you get to talk with your son Tim. I pray with you that in time he will return to the training of his childhood.
Train up a child in the way he should go and when he is old he will not depart from it. Patricia

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you my friend. That is so very true. I guess we are parents want it done now but God has His own plan! love, Teri
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Teresa,

I found a little mistake in one of your lines. When I went back to find it to tell you
about it I couldn't find it. So maybe it was my mistake. Your son sounds very nice to me. I know you're happy with him and your other sons.

Kat

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much my friend. I do love my sons very much. love, Teri
reply by MizKat on 10-Dec-2016
    I know that you love your sons. Just as I love mine. My oldest son lives far away and I never get to see him. Kat
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Teri,

I'm sure you did send a smile or many to the Lord today and everyday.
I think you did a very excellent job on writing this piece. I can relate
to a lot of what you've written here.

Although we have raised our children in the church and prayed...they
must find their own way and they are good and living in a much different
world...Always loving and respecting their mom...though sometimes it
does not feel like it.

The following lines stood out to me...and thank you for sharing all of
this...

"As we were ending the conversation I said, "Tim, you now I always pray. I realize we have different ways of thinking, but I will always pray for you. I will pray about this situation too."

He said, "Mom, we can always agree to disagree."

So I stated, "That is right, but you are my son and I will always love you and pray for you."

Love,
Linda

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you my friend! I just know the Lord is working and it feel so good! love, Teri
Comment from mbroyles2
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When our loved ones don't necessarily believe as we do, we must understand that true faith comes from experiencing God's glory. I suspect once your son truly experiences God miraculous grace, nothing will sway his thinking again.
Thank you for sharing this story.
Michael

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much Michael for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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Some may stray during the middle stages of their lives but they always return to the teachings of their youth. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much Charlie. I guess being a mother I don't want them to go through things they don't have to but they will come back to Him! Blessings, Teri
Comment from EricBrady
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Praise God! He is in control and He is at work. This is a wonderful praise report and I can't wait for the rest of the story. We will be praying with you. Best wishes and God's blessings.

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you so much my friends! There is no better feeling then to see God's miraculous hand at work even if we don't know the whole story! Blessings, Teri
Comment from damommy
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Don't let this worry you too much. I had a similar conversation a few years ago with my middle son. After talking to him, I realized what he meant. He still believes, but he see things in a different way than mine, but it's still a good way.

There's nothing that would be more heart-breaking than thinking a child had lost his way to God. I don't think that's what Timothy meant. He's still working for the good of his fellow man.

Rest easy, my friend. God is in His heaven and all is well. 8-)

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016
    Thank you my friend! I needed to hear that tonight! love you, Teri