Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hello my dear Gypsy;
-The Sacto Poetess writes with a flare which is as beauty as a rose but prickled as the thorns it carries an such as this poem of why do the vamps roam but for the warm blood of a selected quest's nourishment.
-This beautifully romantic haiku tells of a place that is been built on a frigid ground and where the vampires and vampiresses search the surrounding villages when the sun dips slowly in the West part of a Romania type land. There their screeching howls and air swept breeze from their approaches bring terror to the villager's homeland.
-Everything speaks true in your haiku and it's flavorful writing of the first two lines are so adamantly descriptive with a demonstrative vividness.
-Your satori blends like the blood that mixes with theirs when they strike unnoticed in the night with fangs prodding and puncturing the soft tissue that blends with theirs an then mingles life back into their body.
-Thank you for sharing Gypsy and take care and have a good one.
Alex
PS: As you can see them getting into your's and Dean's work.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016

Thank you, Alex, I am grateful that you are following the story. :)

gypsy hugs

reply by krys123 on 23-Oct-2016

You're very welcome Gypsy and yes I am following the story very well and with great intensity as I'm enjoying it very much.
Alex

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

That was quick--we are into the drama of Book Two! I admired your Gothic picture and descriptive haiku to establish the setting. Once again, your use of alliteration heightens the intensity. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016

Thanks, Joan, you are very kind. I never know what my muse will come up with. it feels right to keep the momentum going.

Gypsy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

That is lovely artwork! Oh, give me a home where the vampires still roam. Great description. You would expect the vampires to be attracted to the cold ground. This has a spooky effect. and cold blooded love makes a great last line. It's true that they would be incapable of a warm feeling of love. judi

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016

LoL I did not think about the song.

Thank you, Judi, your review is very helpful to us. Dean and I thank you.

Gypsy

reply by judiverse on 21-Oct-2016

You're very welcome. Seize the day! judi

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Very beautiful like all the other ones. What does hora mean? Is it horror?
I found the author notes very interesting. Good luck with your book.
Thanks for sharing. Que tengas un buen día.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016

Thank you, Maria Jose. :) Yes, Hora Haiku means Horror Haiku. Hora is the Japanese word for Horror.
Dean and I appreciate you reading our book and following the story.

Abrazos,

Gypsy

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

Cold blooded love
That screams volumes when it comes to vampires and how they love. Sends chills through me.
Really well written and a great start to what is no doubt going to be a fantastic book.
Also, I love the graphic, it is amazing!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016

Thank you, sweetie pie. Dean and I are grateful for your reviews and readership. :)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Alex Biasin

Excellent

This was very interesting.
I'm intrigued by the concept and looking forward to reading more of the work as you post it.
I enjoyed the haiku - it worked very well and it managed to convey a lot whilst saying a little.
Very good stuff.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you, Alex, Dean and I appreciate that you are taking the time to read our book. :)

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

This is so great to watch you guys create it step by step and now your own book is at Amazon...Great! It is like watching a movie being filmed.
I have done that too....
Actually...an orange juice commercial filmed in my yard...
My street was a movie set for
lots of films. Good job!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thank you, Nika, the orange juice commercial ... that is fantastic. Dean and I appreciate your readership. Also, the good wishes about my little book of haiku. Now I am working on publishing our first Hora Haiku.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Now the peace before the storm as they say.
This has been quite a different series and I Hope this is a unique start that you two do together.


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 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Hello, Barb, there is no one in the world I would write this book with, other than Dean. We plan to continue writing them until our fingers fall off. LOL just kidding about the fingers.

luv ya, sweetie pie :)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Awesome beginning to the continuation of this book of Gothic terror tales. I cannot but feel for Mirela's current situation knowing she ran away from her parents because she felt black magic was wrong. Now in love with a werewolf that fought with his brother for her love, she must live with the knowledge she was the cause. This is a sad beginning to what will surely be a terrifying story.

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 Comment Written 20-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

I see you have been reading ... LoL You are almost caught up or close to it. Good job! You win an award.....
Don't worry about Mirela, she is a fighter. She loves Varcolac and Claudiu but she is in love with Claudiu. I know, it gets confusing for me too. LoL