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Comment from Dean Kuch
Poor misguided Nelly...
Alas, poor Nelly! I knew her well, Horatio
Ya know, Bill, he who trims himself to suit everyone will soon whittle himself away.
Just ask Nelly.
Personally, I subscribe to the theory which believes that we should always strive to be a first-rate version of ourselves, instead of a second-rate version of everybody else.
Funny stuff, and excellent rhyming, too!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Poor misguided Nelly...
Alas, poor Nelly! I knew her well, Horatio
Ya know, Bill, he who trims himself to suit everyone will soon whittle himself away.
Just ask Nelly.
Personally, I subscribe to the theory which believes that we should always strive to be a first-rate version of ourselves, instead of a second-rate version of everybody else.
Funny stuff, and excellent rhyming, too!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Dean, for giving this a look. Bill
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Sure, Bill.
Anytime.
Comment from jusylee72
Once again your humor is unique and a little twisted. I love it. The ending with the fading away of the Capitols is Brilliant and ironically funny. Thank you for the bright beginning to my day.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Once again your humor is unique and a little twisted. I love it. The ending with the fading away of the Capitols is Brilliant and ironically funny. Thank you for the bright beginning to my day.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Jusylee, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Heather Knight
Your poem is very funny, starting with the protagonist's name.
I feel sorry for her even if she's a trickster.
I love what you have done with the letters getting small at the end to symbolize her weight loss.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Your poem is very funny, starting with the protagonist's name.
I feel sorry for her even if she's a trickster.
I love what you have done with the letters getting small at the end to symbolize her weight loss.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, MJ, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from royowen
A very fun poem Bill, imaginative and very creative, it looks like something deep out of the psyche. I really like this most entertaingly readable, rollicking artistic sweetmeat. The meter was even, the clever wording and aaab rhyming embellishes it very nicely indeed, well done, blessings,, Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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A very fun poem Bill, imaginative and very creative, it looks like something deep out of the psyche. I really like this most entertaingly readable, rollicking artistic sweetmeat. The meter was even, the clever wording and aaab rhyming embellishes it very nicely indeed, well done, blessings,, Roy
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Roy, for the excellent review. Bill
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Welcome Bill,
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahaha, honestly Bill, where the heck do you get it from. It's hilarious. You really have a talent for this. The name alone: Knichernoodelson. Love it. All the best. Ulla:))
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Hahahahaha, honestly Bill, where the heck do you get it from. It's hilarious. You really have a talent for this. The name alone: Knichernoodelson. Love it. All the best. Ulla:))
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
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Thank you, Ulla, for the excellent review. Bill
