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Comment from VictoriaJoyce
Ok. This one was a little 'out there' but enjoyable as usual. Where do you come up with these? I'm sure you keep your loved ones and friends in your 'circle' well entertained.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Ok. This one was a little 'out there' but enjoyable as usual. Where do you come up with these? I'm sure you keep your loved ones and friends in your 'circle' well entertained.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Victoria, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
She probably had to have them reduced, Bill. I've heard from more than a few full-busted ladies that it is not only very hard on their backs, lugging those luscious lumps around day-in and day-out, but the cost of a brazier adequate enough to hold everything in its rightful place is much less expensive. One could even say much less expansive, too.
Well done. Great bouncy rhythm (no puns intended, ahem.)
~Dean
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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She probably had to have them reduced, Bill. I've heard from more than a few full-busted ladies that it is not only very hard on their backs, lugging those luscious lumps around day-in and day-out, but the cost of a brazier adequate enough to hold everything in its rightful place is much less expensive. One could even say much less expansive, too.
Well done. Great bouncy rhythm (no puns intended, ahem.)
~Dean
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Dean, for the voluptuous review. Bill
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Yes sir, you bet'cha. :)
Comment from fafa
Good poem where the capacity of thereader puts itself to the limit because therehappen situations of the real life but thereseems to be something that generatescertain comicalness, as if it was a satire,greetings
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Good poem where the capacity of thereader puts itself to the limit because therehappen situations of the real life but thereseems to be something that generatescertain comicalness, as if it was a satire,greetings
Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Gracias, Fafa , para la revisión de mi trabajo. Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous poem to bring some smiles on a Monday and take the mind away from the disturbing news of another attack on humanity.
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A very well-written humorous poem to bring some smiles on a Monday and take the mind away from the disturbing news of another attack on humanity.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Sandra, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! LOve her name! This is another of your imaginative flights from reality that I enjoy so much. :)
USC student agitato <-- OOPS! Forgot the R on AGITATOR
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LOL! LOve her name! This is another of your imaginative flights from reality that I enjoy so much. :)
USC student agitato <-- OOPS! Forgot the R on AGITATOR
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Phyllis, for the enthusiastic review and for noting my R-less agitator. Bill
