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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Scene at a Coffee Shop"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from chcbeck
Love this quick witted piece, I love the fast pace too. Its easy to picture the scene taking place in front of you. Really enjoyed
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Love this quick witted piece, I love the fast pace too. Its easy to picture the scene taking place in front of you. Really enjoyed
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Zue65
Oh yes, I had a good laugh really. Ned must really be a simpleton and Pons is really a cool guy with a lot of patience in his pocket. LOL. Anyway, I enjoyed reading your one scene script. God bless, thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Oh yes, I had a good laugh really. Ned must really be a simpleton and Pons is really a cool guy with a lot of patience in his pocket. LOL. Anyway, I enjoyed reading your one scene script. God bless, thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Nassus, for the great review. Bill
