When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Nichole's Break"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from judiverse
This should be a cautionary tale for young people hoping to break into show business. I know of some people from community theater who tried to make the leap but eventually gave it up. One was an extremely talented singer. Sounds like Nicole will be separated from Jeff as she's on tour with the cruise line. She's already feeling her age! I'm sure that's true, especially as she realized she was the oldest one in the show. She had foresight in planning an alternative career as a speech therapist. You must have been very patient throughout her struggles. Great write. judi
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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This should be a cautionary tale for young people hoping to break into show business. I know of some people from community theater who tried to make the leap but eventually gave it up. One was an extremely talented singer. Sounds like Nicole will be separated from Jeff as she's on tour with the cruise line. She's already feeling her age! I'm sure that's true, especially as she realized she was the oldest one in the show. She had foresight in planning an alternative career as a speech therapist. You must have been very patient throughout her struggles. Great write. judi
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I empathized since I wanted to be an actress too. My parents discouraged me. I didn't want to do that to Nichole. And yes, she was intelligent enough to make other plans.
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You were wise to let her pursue her own path. There are always opportunities to enjoy amateur theater, even if you don't make it into the big time. judi
Comment from Deniz22
This is sweet to see your relationship renewed with your beloved daughter. But then new challenges are in the offing...isn't human to expect one's parents to drop everything and continue to support and applaud no matter what? Interesting story...JB
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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This is sweet to see your relationship renewed with your beloved daughter. But then new challenges are in the offing...isn't human to expect one's parents to drop everything and continue to support and applaud no matter what? Interesting story...JB
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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You're such an understanding boy. Say "good night" now. :-)
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good night now,..(JB, being obedient
Comment from boxergirl
I could feel your pride and excitement in the tone of this post, Shari. The feeling of reconnecting with your daughter and to see her back to her old self...My mom said that about me when I got my divorce. lol
It looks like your answer is going to be a negative on taking a cruise. I hope it doesn't put a damper on your trip to see her.
Small SPAG - As soon as Nicole stepped off the gangway(,)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I could feel your pride and excitement in the tone of this post, Shari. The feeling of reconnecting with your daughter and to see her back to her old self...My mom said that about me when I got my divorce. lol
It looks like your answer is going to be a negative on taking a cruise. I hope it doesn't put a damper on your trip to see her.
Small SPAG - As soon as Nicole stepped off the gangway(,)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thanks for catching the SPAG, BG. Sounds as if your mom didn't like your choice of a man either.
Comment from juliesibs
This is a wonderful story. I love to see healing relationships. Kids are hard enough as adults, it gets worse if their other half leaves something to be desired.
I love how you tell your story.
Julie ;o)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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This is a wonderful story. I love to see healing relationships. Kids are hard enough as adults, it gets worse if their other half leaves something to be desired.
I love how you tell your story.
Julie ;o)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thanks, Julie. Thank goodness, my parents liked my husband.
Comment from alexisleech
What is it about being able to help your children obtain another dream, that feels so good? I can imagine how pleased you were, not only being able to help out with the computer, but to know her new employment separated her from the one person who was stopping you guys from being as close as you were.
I hope it didn't backfire when she asked if you were going to join one of the cruises she performed on!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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What is it about being able to help your children obtain another dream, that feels so good? I can imagine how pleased you were, not only being able to help out with the computer, but to know her new employment separated her from the one person who was stopping you guys from being as close as you were.
I hope it didn't backfire when she asked if you were going to join one of the cruises she performed on!
Alexis x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Writing this helps me to look back and analyze my reactions.
Comment from Eigle Rull
This well written chapter is again interesting. I enjoy the excitement of getting a computer and a job on a cruise ship. Wow! That would definitely beat the heck out of waiting tables. Your daughter sounds a bit self-centered, if you don't mind me saying so. Getting an attitude because you hadn't thought of taking the cruise with her? This chapter held my attention very well, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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This well written chapter is again interesting. I enjoy the excitement of getting a computer and a job on a cruise ship. Wow! That would definitely beat the heck out of waiting tables. Your daughter sounds a bit self-centered, if you don't mind me saying so. Getting an attitude because you hadn't thought of taking the cruise with her? This chapter held my attention very well, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I hate to agree, but she did tend to be self-centered. I'm trying to figure out if she still is!
Comment from Donya Quijote
Yes or no? Hmmm, why would that put your relationship in jepordy? Relationships are funny things, ain't they?
Nice to see a chapter light on drama and sad things. This one gives the reader the time to breathe and recuperate. You had been hitting pretty heavy with one tragedy after another. I know that's life but good things happen too. Ever wonder why it is the negative that leaves such lasting impact? Why not the positive?
You daughter seems prette self-assured. I'm thinking she did well on the cruise but will have to wait and see.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Yes or no? Hmmm, why would that put your relationship in jepordy? Relationships are funny things, ain't they?
Nice to see a chapter light on drama and sad things. This one gives the reader the time to breathe and recuperate. You had been hitting pretty heavy with one tragedy after another. I know that's life but good things happen too. Ever wonder why it is the negative that leaves such lasting impact? Why not the positive?
You daughter seems prette self-assured. I'm thinking she did well on the cruise but will have to wait and see.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Glad you appreciate the chapter with happy tidings. You're so right about finding a balance. Guess you're on vacation now?
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no, not till Friday. Got monday off too, but back to school tuesday....
Comment from maggieadams
Oh, the dance with the complex relationship with a daughter. We want for them, their happiness and we want to be able to get off the "egg shells"... You tell this story so well...I relate to the relationship you have with your daughter. I fixed the poem review. I used all my sixes yesterday, or this piece would receive one.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Oh, the dance with the complex relationship with a daughter. We want for them, their happiness and we want to be able to get off the "egg shells"... You tell this story so well...I relate to the relationship you have with your daughter. I fixed the poem review. I used all my sixes yesterday, or this piece would receive one.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thanks, Maggie. Appreciate the virtual six. I still feel as if I have to tread carefully when talking to Nichole. Never sure when she'll get her back up!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, I have an idea as to why the management liked the female lead singer so well. Especially if the members of said management were male. But, I won't go there, Shari, LOL.
Holland American Cruise Lines, huh? That sounds pretty swanky. My wife and I have always dreamed of going on a cruise but could never afford it. Perhaps one day soon. Still, what an awesome sounding opportunity, and she gets to leave Jeff behind for awhile. Maybe she'd meet someone else.
Now, I just wonder what your answer was to Nichole about taking one of the cruises? I guess I'll just have to wait and sea...e-r-r-r, heh-heh, see, LOL!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Well, I have an idea as to why the management liked the female lead singer so well. Especially if the members of said management were male. But, I won't go there, Shari, LOL.
Holland American Cruise Lines, huh? That sounds pretty swanky. My wife and I have always dreamed of going on a cruise but could never afford it. Perhaps one day soon. Still, what an awesome sounding opportunity, and she gets to leave Jeff behind for awhile. Maybe she'd meet someone else.
Now, I just wonder what your answer was to Nichole about taking one of the cruises? I guess I'll just have to wait and sea...e-r-r-r, heh-heh, see, LOL!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Yeap, I was hoping she'd meet someone else, Deano. The lead singer had big boobs, the opposite of Nichole. Cruises were expensive back then. Later, prices went down. Now, they seem high again. Figure at least $100 pp each day and that doesn't count tips.
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Well, that explains why I've never been on a cruise, LOL. :)
Comment from joann r romei
I was waiting for this continuation, things picked up well here, she has a great back up plan and got a chance to have a little fun with her dream of entertaining. Can't imagine what will happen next.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I was waiting for this continuation, things picked up well here, she has a great back up plan and got a chance to have a little fun with her dream of entertaining. Can't imagine what will happen next.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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That cruise job gave her much needed confidence. More surprises in store.
