Miranda the Merry
a story poem in rhyming couplets129 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
Congrats.
Great visual which compliments your work.great rhyme and genre.
A must read seasonally as well as for poets looking for inspiration.
This is magical and whimsical!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
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Congrats.
Great visual which compliments your work.great rhyme and genre.
A must read seasonally as well as for poets looking for inspiration.
This is magical and whimsical!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
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Maddy, thank you so much - it's great to hear from you :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
How did I miss this? It's absolutely superb - congratulations, Brooke.
You certainly deserved the prize for this.
Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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How did I miss this? It's absolutely superb - congratulations, Brooke.
You certainly deserved the prize for this.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Margaret, thank you so much - I'm particularly proud of this story poem, so I'm honored that you approve :-) Brooke
Comment from hifein
Brooke, you continue to enlarge upon your own creativity. i loved miranda the merry and how you played on making lemonade out of lemons in your own imaginative and poetic way. best, hi
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Brooke, you continue to enlarge upon your own creativity. i loved miranda the merry and how you played on making lemonade out of lemons in your own imaginative and poetic way. best, hi
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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hi, thank you so much for your generous and gracious response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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 A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review. |
Comment Written 26-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much! :-) Brooke
Comment from RGstar
I must have missed this one, Brooke as I miss one or two of yours from time to time, though I read them all.
You know this kind of story has a soft spot with me. I love the magic of innocence. It transports back to a time where we lived in thoughts and fantasies now no longer at our disposal. Yet, they live for the innocent, and long may it be so.
Lovely wording and fantastic imagery.
''stop and ''dropped'' not your best rhyme but adequate is it for a super write.
You always deliver,be it simple, funny, cryptic or magical...this has all of those ingredients.
Bravo,
RG
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
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I must have missed this one, Brooke as I miss one or two of yours from time to time, though I read them all.
You know this kind of story has a soft spot with me. I love the magic of innocence. It transports back to a time where we lived in thoughts and fantasies now no longer at our disposal. Yet, they live for the innocent, and long may it be so.
Lovely wording and fantastic imagery.
''stop and ''dropped'' not your best rhyme but adequate is it for a super write.
You always deliver,be it simple, funny, cryptic or magical...this has all of those ingredients.
Bravo,
RG
Comment Written 21-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2015
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RG, thank you so very much, my generous and most thoughtful friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Judy Couch
Very good poem. It tells a charming story. It rhymes well and has good rhythm. Children would probably enjoy hearing it read to them.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
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Very good poem. It tells a charming story. It rhymes well and has good rhythm. Children would probably enjoy hearing it read to them.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
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Judy, thank you so much :-) I'm really proud of this one, so it means a lot to me that you enjoyed it :-) Brooke
Comment from LoannaLois
This is one of my new favorites, now. I just love the story, the new idea for the first snowflake, and the perfect rhyming sequence. I am a sucker for any fairy story...and to add fairy dust is a plus!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
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This is one of my new favorites, now. I just love the story, the new idea for the first snowflake, and the perfect rhyming sequence. I am a sucker for any fairy story...and to add fairy dust is a plus!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
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Lois, thank you so very much for your generous stars and lovely comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Neonewman
All star piece you have delivered here young lady! Characteristics of a brilliant mind it what I used to describe this wondrously magical piece when I voted for it. I feel this should and will be the winner, I wish you the best of luck Brooke.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
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All star piece you have delivered here young lady! Characteristics of a brilliant mind it what I used to describe this wondrously magical piece when I voted for it. I feel this should and will be the winner, I wish you the best of luck Brooke.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 20-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2015
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Steve, thank you so much for your generous stars and wonderfully encouraging comments and kind wishes :-) Brooke
Comment from BeasPeas
An absolutely wonderful poem, start to finish. Interesting, descriptive, and, yes, magical! I wish you every good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2015
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An absolutely wonderful poem, start to finish. Interesting, descriptive, and, yes, magical! I wish you every good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2015
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BeasPeas, I so appreciate your generous stars and thank you so much for your encouraging contest wishes :-) Brooke
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You're welcome
Comment from Sanku
A dreamy fantasy story .reveals the thorough romantic in you .When I read the title I thought it would be a poem about your daughter Miranda( i had often wondered why there were no poems about her )great artwork.
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A dreamy fantasy story .reveals the thorough romantic in you .When I read the title I thought it would be a poem about your daughter Miranda( i had often wondered why there were no poems about her )great artwork.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
