Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

This is a well written haiku, Teresa. Your satori line is a nice surprise -- and a good one!

Your accompanying artwork is a beautiful enhancement to your well chosen words.

Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest! Alana

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you alana:)

reply by acerisestory on 22-Nov-2014

You are welcome! Alana

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Reefs and coral, indeed they are very colorful, that's a very nice Haiku poem, good luck at the contest.I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Lakeport.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you - anon.

reply by lakeport on 22-Nov-2014

you are welcome,lakeport.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi author. I enjoyed reading your little haiku style poem. I like the idea of a coral reef being a house for fish and so pretty too with the anemones. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you - anon.