Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Foot in Mouth Fred."My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
40 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes you just don't know when to stop. We've all been there. I think we think we can dig ourselves out of whatever hole we put ourselves in but it never works. We just make it worse.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Sometimes you just don't know when to stop. We've all been there. I think we think we can dig ourselves out of whatever hole we put ourselves in but it never works. We just make it worse.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thanks Meaghan?? I think. I was so appreciteive of the picture someone did for me years ago for the FIM Man. And I am sure as you said not just men suffer from Foot In Mouth hehe. Cheers.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha!
Hey, it's been known to happen to folks before, and on more than one occasion I'm afraid, Geoff.
There are a few people I know who suffer terribly from the more severe version, The most foul Perpetual Foot in Mouth Disease.
Dreadful malady. These poor people simply can't help what comes flying out of their pie-holes!
It's even managed to infect me a time or two, I'm ashamed to admit.
Funny poem with hilarious accompanying artwork.
Well done, mate!
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Hahaha!
Hey, it's been known to happen to folks before, and on more than one occasion I'm afraid, Geoff.
There are a few people I know who suffer terribly from the more severe version, The most foul Perpetual Foot in Mouth Disease.
Dreadful malady. These poor people simply can't help what comes flying out of their pie-holes!
It's even managed to infect me a time or two, I'm ashamed to admit.
Funny poem with hilarious accompanying artwork.
Well done, mate!
~Dean :}
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thanks Dean, I was so appreciative of the person who made the FIM man for me years ago. Appreciate the great review, thanks.
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It's always my pleasure, Geoff.
Blessings, mate.
~Dean :}
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written truthful limerick. We do say some things at time that was maybe better not to say it at all. It may hurt or offend someone that can either took it the wrong way or they are guilty of something.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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A very well-written truthful limerick. We do say some things at time that was maybe better not to say it at all. It may hurt or offend someone that can either took it the wrong way or they are guilty of something.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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AMEn Sis glad you liked it. I declare myself as the president of the FIMAA hehe I loved this picture someone made for me a few years ago. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Cmelton
This is a great little rhyme and a pretty funny one as well. I enjoyed reading it and would love to see you expand it a little. I liked the rhyming scheme as well as the message and think you have written a wonderful piece here. All the best to you and as always God bless.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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This is a great little rhyme and a pretty funny one as well. I enjoyed reading it and would love to see you expand it a little. I liked the rhyming scheme as well as the message and think you have written a wonderful piece here. All the best to you and as always God bless.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thanks for the great review. Who knows you could have something about being expanded. I was so grateful to a friend, years ago for doing the picture for me..
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a nice rhyme.
Outstanding artwork. The image shown is just right for this poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
The author's notes are appreciated.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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This is a nice rhyme.
Outstanding artwork. The image shown is just right for this poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
The author's notes are appreciated.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thanks Nicole. Someone made the picture of the F I M man for me years ago. Appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from tfawcus
A limerick with a slightly tortured rhythm in consonance with the lament of its writer! As the saying goes, you can't please all of the people all of the time!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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A limerick with a slightly tortured rhythm in consonance with the lament of its writer! As the saying goes, you can't please all of the people all of the time!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thanks friend. Someone made the FIM man for me a few years ago. Appreciate the great review.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
We all know a Fred. Some people just shouldn't talk. It never comes out right. They may mean well, but somehow always make a mess of things.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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We all know a Fred. Some people just shouldn't talk. It never comes out right. They may mean well, but somehow always make a mess of things.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Yep, fer shore mate. I told Sasha you mentioned Carlos, hehe her neighbour namesake in your last chapter. Thanks buddy.
Comment from Thal1959
Charming, Geoff. here in America, we call them liberals, Bwahahaha! Actually, this is pretty close to a limerick. Maybe the limerick is your natural poetic style.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Charming, Geoff. here in America, we call them liberals, Bwahahaha! Actually, this is pretty close to a limerick. Maybe the limerick is your natural poetic style.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Hey, first cab off the rank and you might be right, more coming. Thanks.
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Believe me, Geoff, I was happy to review this poem of yours. I got a free member cent pump, a free Luck Leprechaun cert, and a 5c bonus! A trifecta!
Comment from Sasha
I got a kick out of this. This poem could actually relate to me as I am known to have what we call 'foot and mouth disease' and not the one that cows get. I didn't see anything that would get you in trouble, but I am also not know for my tactful posts and may well be wrong. Either way, you got me to laugh.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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I got a kick out of this. This poem could actually relate to me as I am known to have what we call 'foot and mouth disease' and not the one that cows get. I didn't see anything that would get you in trouble, but I am also not know for my tactful posts and may well be wrong. Either way, you got me to laugh.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thanks mate. I am glad we have our whacky humour in common. Saw Thomas Bowling mention a Carlos in a recent post. 😃
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TB doesn't like me and muted me so I cannot read any of his posts but of course he can't read any of mine either.
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I am sorry about that. I guess we are all different, 😋
Comment from Selina Stambi
How I chuckled, Geoff!
Were you writing about yourself, perchance, my friend??
See you soon! Leaving next Friday. Will be in Sydney on the 17th. Will call/ e-mail when I do.
Are you on Viber? It'll be a free call.
Sonali
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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How I chuckled, Geoff!
Were you writing about yourself, perchance, my friend??
See you soon! Leaving next Friday. Will be in Sydney on the 17th. Will call/ e-mail when I do.
Are you on Viber? It'll be a free call.
Sonali
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Skype here. Not well atm hope I will be ok when you are here.
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Sorry to here that. Get well soon. You can download Viber on your mobile phone. It's a free ap (if you have a smartphone, that is). Take care, friend.
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AND Yes it was about me! SO sorry I told Tom I loved doing what I was doing Mikey seemed to think he would not have noticed.
