When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from Charlene0513
To adewpearl,
The multiple amount of hues in creation are for one purpose alone, to allow everything to have its own characteristic and shape for everyone to take notice of.
Charlene
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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To adewpearl,
The multiple amount of hues in creation are for one purpose alone, to allow everything to have its own characteristic and shape for everyone to take notice of.
Charlene
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Charlene, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem is very nice to read about colors and you have the right amount of syllables.
For each example you used, you told of its beauty.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Your poem is very nice to read about colors and you have the right amount of syllables.
For each example you used, you told of its beauty.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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artisart4u, thank you so much for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is good, I bet he had you and I in mind as well. This is a colorful and fun poem. Thanks for sharing this and putting color into our day.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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This is good, I bet he had you and I in mind as well. This is a colorful and fun poem. Thanks for sharing this and putting color into our day.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Bobby Jo :-) Brooke
Comment from Cumbrianlass
LOL! I love it. I admit I kind of wandered through my own garden as I read - the dandelions on the lawn (yep, got several of those). The ladybugs - adore the 'polka dot behind'! And the image of the robin and her lovely blue eggs tucked into her nest. A pair nested on a plant pot on the porch one year. She actually had two clutches of eggs and raised both successfully. Wonderful to watch!
A charming poem, Brooke. A real delight.
Av
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LOL! I love it. I admit I kind of wandered through my own garden as I read - the dandelions on the lawn (yep, got several of those). The ladybugs - adore the 'polka dot behind'! And the image of the robin and her lovely blue eggs tucked into her nest. A pair nested on a plant pot on the porch one year. She actually had two clutches of eggs and raised both successfully. Wonderful to watch!
A charming poem, Brooke. A real delight.
Av
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from trimple
Hi Brooke, this is so beautiful, both in content and in pen. You bring alive the smallest things.
The ending was just perfect . I'm smiling here :)
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke, this is so beautiful, both in content and in pen. You bring alive the smallest things.
The ending was just perfect . I'm smiling here :)
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Tracey, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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The pleasure was mine, really..
Comment from Zinnia48
Beautiful poetic description of the colors of nature. Favorite lines": Or maybe it was sunshine
with bursts of glowing gold,
or dandelions, just as bright,
but easier to hold.
I love the idea of holding little suns in my hands. As usual-gratefully, Caroline
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Beautiful poetic description of the colors of nature. Favorite lines": Or maybe it was sunshine
with bursts of glowing gold,
or dandelions, just as bright,
but easier to hold.
I love the idea of holding little suns in my hands. As usual-gratefully, Caroline
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Caroline, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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I wanted you to know that I thought of your poem as I was driving my grandson to school today. It occurred to me that the colors in nature are so important to me that I keep bringing them into other arenas. Currently I have such a longing for the purple of pansies that I am painting my 8 foot fence purple! caroline
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Well, I'm glad he visited your lawn. I'm thankful for the colorful sunsets because there is just something that can't top an amazing sunset for me. Great job with this friend
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Well, I'm glad he visited your lawn. I'm thankful for the colorful sunsets because there is just something that can't top an amazing sunset for me. Great job with this friend
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, ExperiencingLiphe :-) Brooke
Comment from bhogg
My day hasn't been a great one. Your work always lifts my spirits and touches my heart! It is so special that you share your gifts. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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My day hasn't been a great one. Your work always lifts my spirits and touches my heart! It is so special that you share your gifts. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Bill, I am sorry to hear it's been a less than stellar day, but I am so glad my poem helped a little. Thank you for sharing that with me, and thank you for your generous review :-) Brooke
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I just posted a poem that perhaps explains my melancholy. Bill
Comment from kristo81
What a delightful series of verses; an enchanting recitation of nature's wonders. It started with a Captivating introduction of many a child's favourite insect, the ladybird with polka dot behind (brilliant)Then comes the beautiful Robin with gorgeous redbreast, although the male tends to be the more spactacular of the two. Small contention, the eggs are white with reddish brown specks or blotches; unless of course they've mutated since I were a lad. Despite this picky point I thoroughly enjoyed your submission. Oh! to be a teacher blessed with reading this poem to a bunch of enchanted toddlers,Well done
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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What a delightful series of verses; an enchanting recitation of nature's wonders. It started with a Captivating introduction of many a child's favourite insect, the ladybird with polka dot behind (brilliant)Then comes the beautiful Robin with gorgeous redbreast, although the male tends to be the more spactacular of the two. Small contention, the eggs are white with reddish brown specks or blotches; unless of course they've mutated since I were a lad. Despite this picky point I thoroughly enjoyed your submission. Oh! to be a teacher blessed with reading this poem to a bunch of enchanted toddlers,Well done
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Kristo, thank you so much. I am guessing you are from another country than I am because in the U.S. anyone will tell you robin a robin eggs is a lovely shade of light blue - we even have paint that is identified as robin egg blue. :-) I appreciate your generous six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from dragonpoet
This is short and to the point. God created everything and so visited everywhere. We should always enjoy and be thankful for all the beautiful things in the world. Even some weeds are pretty (i.e. the dandelion).
The picture is of an asian beetle not a ladybug. I think ladybugs are only red.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is short and to the point. God created everything and so visited everywhere. We should always enjoy and be thankful for all the beautiful things in the world. Even some weeds are pretty (i.e. the dandelion).
The picture is of an asian beetle not a ladybug. I think ladybugs are only red.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Joan, thank you so much for your gracious and generous review. Around here the ones with dots are always referred to as lady bugs. I don't know if it's scientifically accurate, but it is common practice. I'm sure anyone seeing a little red beetle with polka dots on it would identify it as a lady bug :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke.
Joan
