Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your well chosen words allow the reader the thoughts of seducing some one special with he sexy lingerie

good enjambment to flow through sentences

good visual to portray your message

good alliteration in
silky, satin
suspenders, stockings

flows well


cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi Smoothiecool :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

What a fun contest! I love the Eagles, love the fact the contest is not blind, and am enjoying the different interpretations of the titles. Love your take on "One of These Nights." Very fun look at seduction. Nice rhyming couplets that flow well. I enjoyed the lightness of the poem! My best good luck wishes in the contest. Sue

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi Sue :) Thank you for your lovely positive feedback - this has been a great contest - I'm thrilled with the range of takes on the titles, lots of fun and some great writing.
Thank you for your great comments and good luck wishes also :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Leineco

Exceptional

Love it! A wonderful mix of playfulness. . .and, seriously!

Deceptively light read. . .you seduce us right in (call this the warm up!) ;-)

I hope you don't respond to this yet. . .I hope you took yourself up on it :-)

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi lorraine :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and 6 star award - very generous of you and I appreciate both!
Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the author notes. Couples do have to make time for each other. Our lives can get pretty busy with work, children and house. But we do have to remember it is couples first some time. In the end, it will be just the two of your together. Great work.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Hi Ellie :) thank you for your great feedback. True words of wisdom :) kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

This was a perfect poem for that title, great couplets that carried the story, and was very humours ( at least for me !) I really liked it, good luck in the competition ,
Andrew

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Hi Andrew :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both and am glad you enjoyed the poem! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Debra;
Ooh La La.... What a night he's going to have! I like your writing very much and good luck in the contest but this is a very exceptionally humorous poem and I enjoyed reading this very much.
Your resume in rhyming was done very well in your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your writing and your rhythm was neither forced nor labored and seemed to help with the rhythmic flow. However there is a few rhymes that I thought was a little bit forced but not entirely labored.
Your writing itself and its imagery was very descriptive and eloquently expressive throughout your writing.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing and posting it may the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Thank you Alex, for your comments and good luck wishes. Much appreciated! Kindest regards, Debra

reply by krys123 on 23-Aug-2014

You are so sincerely welcome Debra.
Alex

Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

Very steamy! Her husband's a senior pastor of a Pentecostal church? :) Maybe a Roman Catholic priest? I don't which one's heart would stop first...Anyway, you've done quite a fine job of showing readers a hot-blooded woman:)

Hits the spot.

Mike

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Thank you Mike, for your great feedback. Glad you enjoyed :) Kindest regards, Debra

reply by mikemagine on 22-Aug-2014

Sure thing Debra!!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I remember those days of yore when my kids kept my wife busy all day and wore her out. Then "one of those nights" she would surprise me the way the Speaker does here. I like the light-hearted TONE of this poem which reveals a woman who would be a lover, not just a mother. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Hi Rod :) Thank you for your great feedback, glad you enjoyed this and that it brought back memories for you! It's hard to switch off mother mode and switch on lover mode - not impossible though! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I won't read this to my husband, he might think his luck is changing and his blood pressure would shoot up! LOL, you little temptress! What was his answer, or is that private!! I love your poems, they are never serious, just real good fun. Don't say that to your hubby! LOL. Good luck in the contest, Debra! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

LOL! Thanks Sandra for your great feedback :) Glad you enjoyed the humour in this! I'm sure Shaun would appreciate me making the effort but I'd much prefer a cup of tea and a bar of chocolate in front of the tv after a day shift with the kids! Not that he's deprived, mind you lol! Lots of love, Debra xx

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Oh...OK, Debs, I'll be kind enough to let you have your wicked way with me. ;-)

Great fun entry into your own contest.

Thanks for the smiles, and good luck.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014

Hehe Ray ;)
Glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you for your fun feedback and good luck wishes. Much appreciated as always :) Love, Debs x