The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "For they are His to give"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Beautiful and soundly rhyming poem Carolyn. Wonderful picture joined to your words that make one think and ponder. Very nicely done.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Beautiful and soundly rhyming poem Carolyn. Wonderful picture joined to your words that make one think and ponder. Very nicely done.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thanks Sarah for this fine review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a wonderful poem too. I love what you say in it. You are great at writing all types of poetry, but my favorite are the inspirational ones.
Kat
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a wonderful poem too. I love what you say in it. You are great at writing all types of poetry, but my favorite are the inspirational ones.
Kat
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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They bring a sweet peace to this writer as well. Thank you Mt. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Dean Kuch
I myself do so each and every day, notesandmore, and give praise through fervent prayer and supplication.
Well done, a very inspirational and uplifting write!!Dean
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I myself do so each and every day, notesandmore, and give praise through fervent prayer and supplication.
Well done, a very inspirational and uplifting write!!Dean
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thank you Dean, :-) Carolyn
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You're very welcome, Carolyn. Have a wonderful week, ya' hear? :]~Dean
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose for your poem
It is a perfect make.
What a lovely poem to read this early Sunday morning.
Thank you for sharing.
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I love the artwork you choose for your poem
It is a perfect make.
What a lovely poem to read this early Sunday morning.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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misscookie,
thank young so much for the sweet review and awesome stars. I am happy you enjoyed this one, :-) Carolyn
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You're very welcome, have a best day.
Until next time, Cookie
Comment from royowen
A beautiful poem and a articulately declared exhortation to praise the .lord of glory, for all the benefits He heaps upon us, all the beauty that's shown by Him all around us! You have taken God's creation and turned it into a thanksgiving to God! We are worthy because of what Christ has done! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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A beautiful poem and a articulately declared exhortation to praise the .lord of glory, for all the benefits He heaps upon us, all the beauty that's shown by Him all around us! You have taken God's creation and turned it into a thanksgiving to God! We are worthy because of what Christ has done! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thank you Roy, I appreciate that you enjoy and understand my poetry. God is so good. Love, Carolyn
Comment from tbacha58
And when you feel unworthy
And ponder why you live
thank God for all His treasures
For they are His to give
That is such a sweet loving poem, to both your man, and to God.
The picture is so beautiful, and the rhyming gave your poem such a nice flow to listen while reading it. Well done. Bless u Terry xoxo
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And when you feel unworthy
And ponder why you live
thank God for all His treasures
For they are His to give
That is such a sweet loving poem, to both your man, and to God.
The picture is so beautiful, and the rhyming gave your poem such a nice flow to listen while reading it. Well done. Bless u Terry xoxo
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thank you Terry for this wonderful review, :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn;
In your writing your tempo and meter are done so well that your poems rhythm flows smoothly throughout your writing.
You mastered the rhyming also very well and neither of your rhymes are forced nor labored.
I was also impressed very much by the inspirational and enlightening characteristics of your poem and imagery that was very descriptive and eloquently expressive throughout.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Carolyn;
In your writing your tempo and meter are done so well that your poems rhythm flows smoothly throughout your writing.
You mastered the rhyming also very well and neither of your rhymes are forced nor labored.
I was also impressed very much by the inspirational and enlightening characteristics of your poem and imagery that was very descriptive and eloquently expressive throughout.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thank you dear Alex for this fine review. You are always so encouraging.
:-)n Carolyn
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You are so sincerely welcome Carolyn.
Alex
Comment from Spitfire
We can never get enough reminders of how much we owe a Divine Being for creating the sea, sky, mountains and prairies. Last stanza emphasizes God's unselfishness compared to our self-centered thoughts.
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We can never get enough reminders of how much we owe a Divine Being for creating the sea, sky, mountains and prairies. Last stanza emphasizes God's unselfishness compared to our self-centered thoughts.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Thank you Shari for your insightful comments. Have a great week. :-) Carolyn
Comment from lynglyng
Beautiful poem,picture and message. It flowed well and was so positive. I loved it and thought it had good rhyming. I hope to read more of your poems soon!
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Beautiful poem,picture and message. It flowed well and was so positive. I loved it and thought it had good rhyming. I hope to read more of your poems soon!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014
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Please stop by anytime, I am happy you enjoyed this one. :-)Carolyn
Comment from adewpearl
good use of abcb rhyming
excellent use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
vivid detail of the natural setting
nice alliteration in praise the power
a thoughtful poem of appreciation for God's gifts
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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good use of abcb rhyming
excellent use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
vivid detail of the natural setting
nice alliteration in praise the power
a thoughtful poem of appreciation for God's gifts
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2014
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Thank you Brooke, :-) Carolyn
