Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Exactly to the prompt. No glaring spags and AABB and meter. I can recommend no major changes. Excellent. I'm pretty sure I dated his sister for a time..

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, LIJ, for the excellent review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very good entry in this funny nonsense poetry contest! I loved the narrative that weaves it's way through this clever work! I must admit when I came to the part were the character was chasing cars, I thought it was a dog, but then it became clear it must have been a person! Well,written, I loved it, you have my vote, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, Roy, for the great review.

Comment from costellsgirl33

Excellent

Oh, this is hilarious! I was reading and I'm like what's going on right now, but this is a funny nonsense poem contest. So, you hit the nail on the head, lol! Good luck

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

reply by costellsgirl33 on 12-Jun-2014

You are very welcome

Comment from aanneee

Excellent

The name alone brings on a great big grin and a chuckle. THis was very funny indeed and I read it out loud and that really made me appreciate the rhyming and everything.

Thank you for the stupid grin on my face - Dinah

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you, Dinah, for the excellent review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Axel Basil Clyde DeCloy.......is my favorite part...it trips off the tongue so nicely ...I hate he flings pooh in Timbuktu....what does he fling in Anglesea ?
Well done I like your nonsense
Good luck and
God bless

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you, Jenny, for the fun review.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah! U-m-m-m-m-m-m... no. I'll think that I'll do everything humanly possible to avoid seeing this ghastly guy! he throws poo too?! Good night, who in their right mind would want to go and see something like that?

Any idea when the next show starts?

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for the cool review, Dean. Did you see that Mastery (Bob) gave you props for help with his book? Super!

reply by Dean Kuch on 12-Jun-2014

No, I didn't see that, but I did congratulate him on his recent success. I really didn't do anything really, just created a cover for his book. Bob's a great guy, and he deserves all the success he can handle.

You're very welcome for the review, it was my pleasure. Drop by my portfolio anytime, LOL...

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

Well he certainly does seem quite the character does Axel Basil Clyde DeCloy. Would be interesting meeting a chap like this. Your poem is a great read, rthe rhyme works so well

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Alex Basil Clyde Decloy, indeed that's some boy, I enjoyed reading the story,nice rhyming, Good luck in the contest.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

We sit and wait but it's too late
For Clyde to cease his thunder
He rants around and bangs the gate
but captivates our wonder.

For Axel Basil Clyde DeCloy
none has found an answer
but in the zoo he'll less annoy
We claim we cured the cancer

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for the great review
Axel read it in the zoo
Then he ate it.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

I like this silly story, It sounds a little like the rhythm of Dr. Seuss! Your description evokes all kind of images in the reader's mind! Great job!

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.