Comment from daniela.albu

Excellent

A wonderful poem about our mission in life and our dedication to the loved ones. The illustration is very suggestive and enhances the meaning of your poem personalizing it.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thank you for reading and enjoying this one. :-)

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Sometimes all we need is someone to show us that they care. Someone to let us know we're not alone. You did a great job and I wish you all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thank you for your wonderful review. :-)

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

A excellet poem for this contest. The message is awesome and perfect to go along with this picture. We should bear each others burdens as it says in the Bible.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks NicciFaye, I appreciate that you knew the message came from the Bible. :-)

Comment from buzclick

Excellent

Good picture match.
The truth is deeper than youth knows.
Good poem, good luck with the contest.
I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

And thank you so much for your insightful comments, and best wishes. :-)

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

This piece meets the criteria of the writing prompt as the syllable count is spot on. Good rhyming with bear/care/share. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review and generous rating. :-)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a great little 1-6-1 poem for the writing prompt. Your message is clear in the few words. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thank you Teresa for this great review and best wishes. :-)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I love this picture I do not think the world takes good care of the old and the young and we should one is our past the other our future good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

And thank you for reading and reviewing. I am delighted you got the message intended in this short poem. :-)

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A lovely1-6-1 and the message is very clear about the art and love of sharing and caring for each others burdens. Nice photograph, It gives your verse a lovely touch. Don and Vicki

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thank you for affirming the message of this short work. :-)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This short three-line poem carries a compassionate message and is well presented. It meets all criteria of the contest. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Jeanie Mercer, thank you for your comments and best wishes. :-)