No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Luna luminates the sky,
Mariposa flutters by.
No one knows what there might be,
overhead, a mystery --
till they lift their eyes to see.
an impressive ABC poem, Brooke - the skies are mystifying - I often sit in the conservatory and watch - quite fascinating and makes one feel so small.
good luck with the contest.
margaret
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Luna luminates the sky,
Mariposa flutters by.
No one knows what there might be,
overhead, a mystery --
till they lift their eyes to see.
an impressive ABC poem, Brooke - the skies are mystifying - I often sit in the conservatory and watch - quite fascinating and makes one feel so small.
good luck with the contest.
margaret
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Margaret, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of the butterfly flying across the moon. This is a poem that makes the reader feel good and reminds us of the beauty of the moon and her impact on us.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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I like the image of the butterfly flying across the moon. This is a poem that makes the reader feel good and reminds us of the beauty of the moon and her impact on us.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Elaine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Beautiful verse. True, we can't really know what is above us until we look up. You of course have put that so elegantly. Beautiful rhythm to this piece. Nice job on the ABC and good luck
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Beautiful verse. True, we can't really know what is above us until we look up. You of course have put that so elegantly. Beautiful rhythm to this piece. Nice job on the ABC and good luck
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Jo Lynn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cumbrianlass
A sweet poem for the little lad. May the sense of wonder never leave him.
There's a hint of untold magic in this one, Brooke. Your work often tends to remind me of other things. This reminds me of a line from the song "I Hope You Dance", which says 'give the heavens above more than just a passing glance.
And Luna is also a beautiful moth, which ties in with your Mariposa!
Very nice work.
Av
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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A sweet poem for the little lad. May the sense of wonder never leave him.
There's a hint of untold magic in this one, Brooke. Your work often tends to remind me of other things. This reminds me of a line from the song "I Hope You Dance", which says 'give the heavens above more than just a passing glance.
And Luna is also a beautiful moth, which ties in with your Mariposa!
Very nice work.
Av
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Av, thank you so much :-) I love that song. Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Like your wordplay her- Luna/lunar- moth/moon while also overhead, the mariposa butterfly, one signifying night, the other, rebirth or dawn.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Like your wordplay her- Luna/lunar- moth/moon while also overhead, the mariposa butterfly, one signifying night, the other, rebirth or dawn.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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thanks so much, ravenblack :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
No one knows, indeed the mysterious universe, that' s a very expressed ABC poem. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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No one knows, indeed the mysterious universe, that' s a very expressed ABC poem. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from Maltese Falcon
you have a great poem here. love that its written for someone. hope they like it. the picture it really cute. well done.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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you have a great poem here. love that its written for someone. hope they like it. the picture it really cute. well done.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, Maltese Falcon :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, lovely artwork and your blue setting goes well with this moon time poem.
No one knows what there might be,
overhead, a mystery
great lines and also in life we never what there might be for us. Enjoyed the read Brooke
valda
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Yes, lovely artwork and your blue setting goes well with this moon time poem.
No one knows what there might be,
overhead, a mystery
great lines and also in life we never what there might be for us. Enjoyed the read Brooke
valda
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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valda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ekim777
Just what is it that draws us to the skies. Is it only our fascination with mystery; the mystery that we create. As the metaphor is extended, we are reminded that God did make us guardians of his universe! The real mystery of this poem is the reference to the butterfly. I suppose we all make our own, precious connections. Best wishes. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Just what is it that draws us to the skies. Is it only our fascination with mystery; the mystery that we create. As the metaphor is extended, we are reminded that God did make us guardians of his universe! The real mystery of this poem is the reference to the butterfly. I suppose we all make our own, precious connections. Best wishes. -Ekim777
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Ekim, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
Unlike with the sun, the moon invites us to look up and stare. Late night moon gazing gives a sense of peace and wonder. I like to watch the moon and wonder about the people around our world who maybe doing the exact same thing.
I enjoyed your ABC poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Unlike with the sun, the moon invites us to look up and stare. Late night moon gazing gives a sense of peace and wonder. I like to watch the moon and wonder about the people around our world who maybe doing the exact same thing.
I enjoyed your ABC poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Cajungirl, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generous and gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
