Comment from tmor3735

Excellent

Ronnie, very nice work. Very literate. Your picture on this was beautiful and your words followed that.your Ending word infinity is special to me,when I put my young girls to bed at night I would kiss them goodnight,and my last words were "I love you infinity

























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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you for enjoying and appreciating this poem,
sincerely grateful. And also touched by your sharing
that precious goodnite expression when putting your
girls to bed. I loved it...and bless you for having
such adorable girls. Best wishes, Ronni

Comment from billscott

Excellent

I loved these lines:

enticing moon's coveted, majestic parlor
vibrant, euphoric hues, resplendently aglow

I was reminded of a recent event under the moonlight.

Thank you for this bit of fun!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you for enjoying this poem, and sharing your
own relateable moonligh event! Made my joy do
leap frogs in elation that it brought you a
wee bit of fun. Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

ronni, you have executed an amazing free verse write using alliteration, solid and fresh wording, and projection of the emotion that you write about. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

oF need to reverse capitalization.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you dear GracieAnn for your lovely thoughts and
comments on this poem, always an added pleasure when
you enjoy. Thanks...did fix that reverse cap on word 'oF'
Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

What a soulful and loving presentation. You have a great rhythm and the imagery is just awesome. This has a very musical quality to it, as your words sing from the heart. Well done! Les

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you Les, for your most appreciative and gratifying
comments and compliments. You so astutely inferred these
were 'words singing fom the heart'....and that makes my
day for sure! Grateful too for great rating.
Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Rainbowsofhappiness

Exceptional

A truly beautiful and decadently worded piece of poetry! This piece with its carefully selected word choice helps the reader envision an orchestra of immense nature through the melodic phrases used throughout the poem. Flowing sweetly like a serenade is the poem's ability to involve the senses and transition smoothly, seamlessly from one line to the next. The photography and background color choice are perfectly suited to this piece, striking in appearance, capable of drawing immediate attention from the reader. I delighted in the author's use of less common terms to describe feelings. Beautiful music evokes such passionate feelings, so comparing love to these feelings is an excellent accomplishment on the writer's part. The fabulous alliteration woven precisely throughout this piece helps it deliver a more intense impact much like the build up behind a piece of music as the musicians play they construct a beautiful piece of music that gains in intensity until reaching its magnificent peak exploding with emotion. This is not unlike how we feel in our emotions towards love. An excellent comparison, piqued with well written stanzas and eliciting the emotions intended from the reader! All these elements together are why I feel it deserves the six star rating I awarded to it. Eloquently written!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Wow...what a spectacular review! I am truly awed and deeply
moved by your most meticoulous and profoundly detailed
ranges of reflections & perceptions! Your compliments and
sheer enjoyment of expressions conveyed in this presentation
are truly spectacular. I am grateful and nearly on verge of
feeling like dancing on air, from the depth and scope of
your absrbtion of feeling and emotions expored and sired.
Thank you many times over, for your time and attention
of such detail and sharing so conscientously its affectation
and symbolic overtones. And the EXTRA STAR... a crowning
glory...with ascending gladness.
Best wishes always, Ronni

reply by Rainbowsofhappiness on 21-Feb-2014

I'm glad to have caused you such joy! The six star review was truly all your oown as a result of such beautiful poetry!